Comment from LateBloomer

Exceptional

Hi Roy, your Dream of Hope is a place of Utopia. Good descriptive rhyming. I especially liked:

Bright summer days that never end,
where grace and love forever blend.

(Roy, what a beautiful thought.)

Silky rhyming. Gorgeous photo choice. Great presentation. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Margaret, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words were uplifting, descriptive and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they add to the beauty of this poem. I pondered
on life being like the author states and what a wonderful world this would
be! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

What a beautiful presentation. It highlights the beauty you describe in your poem. Great alliteration--garrulous geese, fields-flush-flowers. You describe a lovely, peaceful place. Truth and justice will help keep this a beautiful place. I like that you mention the songs. Music adds to the peaceful atmosphere. Excellent rhyme and word choices. judi

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks Judi, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem has a great and soothing message, Roy.
The rhymes worked well, and the flow was smooth.
Your descriptions were easy to visualize. Yes, we hope
for a beautiful place and will see it if we believe. The
picture was beautiful, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Jan, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Roy,
The beginning of this poem seems like a description of paradise of Earth or Heaven. And the end is a prayer that we all get there some day.
Good mix of words and artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Joan, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by dragonpoet on 30-Sep-2022

You are most kindly welcome, Roy.
Joan

Comment from scongrove

Excellent

Wonderful writing, my friend :) I enjoyed this, and the photo is beautiful. Worthy of a ten!
My favorite part:
Bright summer days that never end,
where grace and love forever blend.
One single light - forever's beam,
shines on the twilight's restful theme.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much dear Shana,

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Beautifully penned and illustrated poem, dear Roy, and it made complete sense. I read one above yours and I swear I couldn't decipher a thing. Thank you for sharing at the human level. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Sally, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Oh, this truly deserved a six. I am reading this on my lunch hour and have been stressed all morning. This has done more to calm me than you can possibly know. The visual beauty you have allowed me to see is gorgeous. The warmth of this gorgeous mecca is immeasurable. Virtual 6 or 7 if you'll take that. Thank you for posting this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Gretchen, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Spitfire

Exceptional

This sounds like heaven to me. I like the alliteration of 'f' in stanza one, 'b' and 'p' in stanza two, the 's' in stanza five. Favorite ideas: the blending of grace and love, the banning of time, the hope that we will all get there.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much Shari, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from estory

Excellent

It's a colorful portrait of heaven, and it is interesting that you have painted that portrait in very Earthlike terms. It is a heaven of flowers and sunshine, mountains and valleys, animals and birds. Very much like a Garden of Eden brought back to life. estory

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022

Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy