Dreaming of hope
A poem41 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Awesome presentation and imagery of heaven. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental pictures. You paint an idyllic place. I had to look up garrulous, thank you for increasing my vocabulary. Your rhyme and meter is perfect, as always. Well done, Roy.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Awesome presentation and imagery of heaven. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental pictures. You paint an idyllic place. I had to look up garrulous, thank you for increasing my vocabulary. Your rhyme and meter is perfect, as always. Well done, Roy.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Gypsy, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poem that describes the beauty of a place beyond Earth where mountain peaks reach to the sky, and summer days that never end. Your entire presentation is relaxing and beautiful with a picture of green rolling hills, and poetry written in the same color as the perfectly manicured lawn. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This is a beautiful poem that describes the beauty of a place beyond Earth where mountain peaks reach to the sky, and summer days that never end. Your entire presentation is relaxing and beautiful with a picture of green rolling hills, and poetry written in the same color as the perfectly manicured lawn. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Roy, our earth is a beautiful place to be. It's nature and its beauty keeps us in its thrall. Let's hope it will stay that way. I loved this well written poem. Wonderful! Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Yes, Roy, our earth is a beautiful place to be. It's nature and its beauty keeps us in its thrall. Let's hope it will stay that way. I loved this well written poem. Wonderful! Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Ulla, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Very nicely put together.Where mountain peaks reach to the sky,
garrulous geese, formations fly. This place of beauty, beyond Earth, where man and beast possess great worth. Nice read.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. Very nicely put together.Where mountain peaks reach to the sky,
garrulous geese, formations fly. This place of beauty, beyond Earth, where man and beast possess great worth. Nice read.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Joanne, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Your welcome
Comment from Barry Penfold
Love this poem. Ryhming scheme is excellent. It is uplifting and totally hits the mark. Can see why you are at the No 1 spot . Well done and I look forward to reading more of your poems. Well done Roy.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Love this poem. Ryhming scheme is excellent. It is uplifting and totally hits the mark. Can see why you are at the No 1 spot . Well done and I look forward to reading more of your poems. Well done Roy.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Barry, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You poetically tell us of a place of beauty and peace that will come again one day. I think of those who have lost so much to Ian over the last few days and think how wonderful it would be if they could exist in this place that you write of.
Beautifully done, Roy.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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You poetically tell us of a place of beauty and peace that will come again one day. I think of those who have lost so much to Ian over the last few days and think how wonderful it would be if they could exist in this place that you write of.
Beautifully done, Roy.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Pam, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Charity Stewart
I love the font color and picture in this poem you written it compliments the story you are telling. The flow and use of words, very vivid. Well done. Keep spreading the good news and love/peace of God. Good day my friend
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I love the font color and picture in this poem you written it compliments the story you are telling. The flow and use of words, very vivid. Well done. Keep spreading the good news and love/peace of God. Good day my friend
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Charity, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Isa 11:6 Speaks of a time when wild animals and tame animals will peacefully exist and be led by a small child.
Isa 25:6 Speaks about the many blessings that will accrue to the faithful.
No more dying, no more hatred, no more sickness.
After the great tribulation, The Earth will be restored to its Edenic state and those who survive will either reside in Heaven or upon the Earth in total peace as they advance toward perfection durin the thousand year reign of Jesus the Christ.
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Isa 11:6 Speaks of a time when wild animals and tame animals will peacefully exist and be led by a small child.
Isa 25:6 Speaks about the many blessings that will accrue to the faithful.
No more dying, no more hatred, no more sickness.
After the great tribulation, The Earth will be restored to its Edenic state and those who survive will either reside in Heaven or upon the Earth in total peace as they advance toward perfection durin the thousand year reign of Jesus the Christ.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Nomi, for the excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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The Bible is filled with much encouragement for those who remain faithful. Sadly there are many who berate this marvelous book, and ignore the promises. I would not want to be in their shoes when the day of reckoning arrives.
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You?re absolutely right dear friend and bro,
Comment from Wendy G
I really enjoyed this poem a lot with its lush imagery. However I found it hard to read with its small yellow font against green background. Otherwise, most excellent writing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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I really enjoyed this poem a lot with its lush imagery. However I found it hard to read with its small yellow font against green background. Otherwise, most excellent writing.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Wendy for the wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming and well-chosen words to describe a place of peace and serenity. Sounds like heaven to me. What a great promise is awaiting us, and best of all we will be with our Saviour and Lord.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Great rhyming and well-chosen words to describe a place of peace and serenity. Sounds like heaven to me. What a great promise is awaiting us, and best of all we will be with our Saviour and Lord.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thanks Anne, for the lovely comments and a kind review, blessings Roy
