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I didn't wear the mask

should have worn the mask

5 total reviews 
Comment from Kaiku
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I will be an idiot, is this a true story? I hope not. If it is, I am very sorry for your loss. How does one review these words? It is a well written story and brings everything front and center. Thank you.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
    Na just a fictional story about an maskless idiot coming to a realization that masks save lives.
reply by Kaiku on 01-Nov-2022
    That's good to know. You had me going! Ha
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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When I read this, I have to say it should be a contender for the contests. I know many people who rejected masks and vaccinations based on some media (Fox) and others in politics who dismissed wearing masks or vaccinations.
Very well written in descriptions and emotion.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
    thanks i have thought about this a lot. Here in Korea everyone has been wearing masks for decades due to the air pollution and yellow dust blowing in from China every spring.
Comment from Teri7
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You did a very good job writing this story. You used very good and very believable words and so sad about the deaths. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
    thanks. I have been thinking of this topic off and on for a while/
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
Your story told was believable. Many people were fooled
by the media which was only an entertainment media source
in it for ratings.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

I cosnidered [ considered ] early retirement as a badge of honor [ period needed here ] I considered myself a freedom fighter, and talked about it on Twitter, Facebook, Gab and everywhere I could find

right-wing cool [Kool] aide, and became an anti-mask zealot, screaming at people who wore masks in public. On more than one occasion I following [ followed ] Tucker's advice [and ] called CPS on parents who had their children wearing masks in public for suspected child abuse.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    thanks I thought about this issue for some time
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is a strong contest submission, as it is a creative use of the prompt, oh to real, but written in a unique way.

Your writing is descriptive, well constructed, and honest.

You successfully captured a deadly conclusion to a colossal mistake.

It is extremely unfortunate that people died in spite of mask mandates. If the mask was not politicised many would still alive today.

Thank you for sharing this important post.



 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
    thanks a lot. This is an issue I have been wrestling with for some time.