Sweet Sally Silver
Was very curious8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-written poem for this contest. I liked how you listed through the verses all of the things Sweet Sally Silver (great alliteration) was curious about. The font is a great size. The colorful presentation is great, and it fits how children's books are often illustrated. The visual is cute and fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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This is a well-written poem for this contest. I liked how you listed through the verses all of the things Sweet Sally Silver (great alliteration) was curious about. The font is a great size. The colorful presentation is great, and it fits how children's books are often illustrated. The visual is cute and fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
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Thank you, your review means a lot to me. :)
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Kiddies motivational poem writing prompt contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Easy for children to understand.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well and are very descriptive for a clear understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Kiddies motivational poem writing prompt contest.
Good rhyme that doesn't sound forced. Easy for children to understand.
Nice presentation. Your words flow well and are very descriptive for a clear understanding.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much for this encouraging review. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely kiddies motivational poem, and one that I'm sure children love to play. I still don't know the answers to a lot of those questions!! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
the clouds did not makes sense = remove the (s)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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That was a lovely kiddies motivational poem, and one that I'm sure children love to play. I still don't know the answers to a lot of those questions!! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
the clouds did not makes sense = remove the (s)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for the correction...both are very appreciated. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Chaotic and true for a child's mind is a rabbit hole filled with inquisitiveness. So many questions leading with Who, what, why, where, how and when, Amazingly, it a primary education that many carry with them through life. I know I am still asking question. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Chaotic and true for a child's mind is a rabbit hole filled with inquisitiveness. So many questions leading with Who, what, why, where, how and when, Amazingly, it a primary education that many carry with them through life. I know I am still asking question. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely poem. I can just imagine a child thinking those thoughts. So much processing to do. I enjoyed the focus on her being curious, as that is the best motivation to learn and understand the big world. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Lovely poem. I can just imagine a child thinking those thoughts. So much processing to do. I enjoyed the focus on her being curious, as that is the best motivation to learn and understand the big world. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a really cute poem for a child. It sounds just the way a child might think as she plays outside in the yard. I remember wondering about the clouds when I was small. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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This is a really cute poem for a child. It sounds just the way a child might think as she plays outside in the yard. I remember wondering about the clouds when I was small. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your kind words. :)
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is adorable. I just loved all the questions that Sally had as an intriguing fun child. She is curious and thorough the whole poem you could tell that she was learning and asking things that make children grow to be more inquisitive in their older years. Great job my friend
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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This is adorable. I just loved all the questions that Sally had as an intriguing fun child. She is curious and thorough the whole poem you could tell that she was learning and asking things that make children grow to be more inquisitive in their older years. Great job my friend
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I really appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
Sweet Sally is good alliteration, which you use elsewhere in the poem with consonance, too.
Sally seems quite happy and finds many things to be curious about in her own backyard. She asks many of the questions kids really ask.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi,
Sweet Sally is good alliteration, which you use elsewhere in the poem with consonance, too.
Sally seems quite happy and finds many things to be curious about in her own backyard. She asks many of the questions kids really ask.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
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Don't mention it.
Joan
