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What think thee if ...6 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
This is fun, mystery poet, and clever. A redo on the roses are red poem I received from my childhood love. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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This is fun, mystery poet, and clever. A redo on the roses are red poem I received from my childhood love. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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I often wonder if my followers wait with bated breath for my next release. I check every three hours or so hoping someone like you, writes a good review. Thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
Now that's a different take on the basic poem we learned when I was a child. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Now that's a different take on the basic poem we learned when I was a child. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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If you haven't yet learned, this author will be like an elevator that doesn't reach the penthouse. Thanks.
Comment from jessizero
I like the poem. The last line is creative. I look forward to seeing the longer piece should the opportunity present itself. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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I like the poem. The last line is creative. I look forward to seeing the longer piece should the opportunity present itself. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Luck is a lady tonight. No, that is for SInatra.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The photograph is magnificent, moody and emotional just like your words here. I have a suggestion for the last line: "As I learn not to be with you". Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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The photograph is magnificent, moody and emotional just like your words here. I have a suggestion for the last line: "As I learn not to be with you". Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Your prompt had me re-read and change the second line to 'which I turn when I'm not with you.' Much better. Thanks for the enlightenment.
Comment from Carlos' girl
First and foremost, that photo is simply outstanding. Your poem it is a pensive and thoughtful verse. Very charming work. I wish you Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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First and foremost, that photo is simply outstanding. Your poem it is a pensive and thoughtful verse. Very charming work. I wish you Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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As she did her yoga exercise, I was fortunate to be sailing by. Thank you.
Comment from Raul1
I do get what you mean about love gone wrong and backfires on you if you make careless mistakes. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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I do get what you mean about love gone wrong and backfires on you if you make careless mistakes. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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I wrote it in her absence from me, not that her love was lost. Still, feel the same forty-two year later, though at my age we stay together 24/7
