A Treasured Friend
They're not hard to find.3 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
A little bit better with the short stuff. Great picture. Are those two girls your granddaughters? You do like to rhyme, and that is one thing that I like.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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A little bit better with the short stuff. Great picture. Are those two girls your granddaughters? You do like to rhyme, and that is one thing that I like.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Just two girls, contest is over. Third place.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good short poem. The message is clear and a good one. However, it's too gray. Add some color in the background or in the font. The text also could be larger. The visual fits perfectly. They are young girls add some youthful colors. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is a good short poem. The message is clear and a good one. However, it's too gray. Add some color in the background or in the font. The text also could be larger. The visual fits perfectly. They are young girls add some youthful colors. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
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;)
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You are welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Yes, all of this poem holds truths of friendship we should cherish for as long as we can. A single good friend is worth more than a thousand acquaintances. Never neglect the one for the thousand. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Yes, all of this poem holds truths of friendship we should cherish for as long as we can. A single good friend is worth more than a thousand acquaintances. Never neglect the one for the thousand. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks!
