Night Whispers
An enduring love19 total reviews
Comment from Nicolee Maree
I liked this because it's true. When you've been married so long you don't hold each other throughout the night, but just sharing the space is enough.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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I liked this because it's true. When you've been married so long you don't hold each other throughout the night, but just sharing the space is enough.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Amen, Thank you for your review.
Comment from karenina
Loved this! I admit I voted for it to win! Congrats on your third place finish...
My choice still stands. (smile)
I should have guessed it was yours!
It was so unique and cleverly written...
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Loved this! I admit I voted for it to win! Congrats on your third place finish...
My choice still stands. (smile)
I should have guessed it was yours!
It was so unique and cleverly written...
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your vote and for the review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A truly warm and charming poem. Being together for years, you become comfortable, relaxed and lifelong companions.
I truly enjoyed this poem, and wish you all the best in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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A truly warm and charming poem. Being together for years, you become comfortable, relaxed and lifelong companions.
I truly enjoyed this poem, and wish you all the best in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Mrs. Mary for the review. I won 3rd place.
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Congratulations on your win.
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Thank you!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is enchanting, Sandra. A beautiful night spent with two people in love. I enjoyed this from word one. I want to wish you congrates on the starving for love contest. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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This is enchanting, Sandra. A beautiful night spent with two people in love. I enjoyed this from word one. I want to wish you congrates on the starving for love contest. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you, John, for your kind words and review.
Comment from Wendy G
A very interesting and well written poem, capturing the changes in sleeping expectations and rules during the journey of life. It's well thought through and well written. Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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A very interesting and well written poem, capturing the changes in sleeping expectations and rules during the journey of life. It's well thought through and well written. Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Wendy, for your wonderful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Starving for Love writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements in your unique style.
Your poem made me think of what happens in long term relationships...usually people fall into a comfortable stage, a deep intimacy and companionship.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Starving for Love writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements in your unique style.
Your poem made me think of what happens in long term relationships...usually people fall into a comfortable stage, a deep intimacy and companionship.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your review, Ms. Gypsy. Your support is appreciated.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting poem. The gentle words enhance the calm feeling of the message. The free verse form takes all pretense from the setting. It simply says this is how it is. It is a wonderful love poem.
Best luck. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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An interesting poem. The gentle words enhance the calm feeling of the message. The free verse form takes all pretense from the setting. It simply says this is how it is. It is a wonderful love poem.
Best luck. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Been there, done that; if it wasn't for a nightly peck on the lips I would think I turned to being a eunuch. The mind is willing, but the body no longer can be wound for I am more grandfather clock than Rolex.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Been there, done that; if it wasn't for a nightly peck on the lips I would think I turned to being a eunuch. The mind is willing, but the body no longer can be wound for I am more grandfather clock than Rolex.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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More grandfather clock than Rolex. lol Tom, you do have a way with words. This has to be the most colorful review I have gotten for this poem. You are a hoot! Thanks for the review and the chuckle.
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I love being me. Unique? Or perhaps just "Odd Thomas," the Dean Koontz character in his mysteries.
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You should cause you can't do much about it at this late stage. lol Besides if it doesn't hurt you or anyone it is perfectly okay. I'm unique myself.
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Maybe, we are genetically related.
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All things are possible especially in the South! lol
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh wow! I loved this so much -- it evokes the warmest of imagery, of two people comfortable in their own individuality, but so close, they need not smother each other with the kind of heat that they probably once had for one another.
Simply beautiful!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Oh wow! I loved this so much -- it evokes the warmest of imagery, of two people comfortable in their own individuality, but so close, they need not smother each other with the kind of heat that they probably once had for one another.
Simply beautiful!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Ms. Dawn, thank you for your heartfelt remarks and the exceptional rating. Both are appreciated.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well written and presented.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
I think this verse is relatable to anyone that has been married over twenty years.
It's funny the evolution from endless touching to barely touching at all.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This is well written and presented.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative!
I think this verse is relatable to anyone that has been married over twenty years.
It's funny the evolution from endless touching to barely touching at all.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thanks for your comments and review.
