Superior Love Affair
It will never end...8 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The picture was awesome. The color scheme
worked well. I liked the smooth flow, the descriptive words, and
the great imagery. I could see everything as I read. I believe the word near the end is tossed rather than tost.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The picture was awesome. The color scheme
worked well. I liked the smooth flow, the descriptive words, and
the great imagery. I could see everything as I read. I believe the word near the end is tossed rather than tost.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a terrific job with the writing prompt. The Great Lakes are all beautiful. I live a short distance from Lake Michigan and often swam there as a child. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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You have done a terrific job with the writing prompt. The Great Lakes are all beautiful. I live a short distance from Lake Michigan and often swam there as a child. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Ricky1024
I like how you brought lake Superior alive which is one of the five Great lakes in Michigan I believe the largest?
Never been there myself but perhaps one day?
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This was well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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I like how you brought lake Superior alive which is one of the five Great lakes in Michigan I believe the largest?
Never been there myself but perhaps one day?
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This was well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it makes my day. :)
Comment from lancellot
This is nicely crafted in your well perfected style. I like the backdrop and the night with gold highlights enhance the story within the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This is nicely crafted in your well perfected style. I like the backdrop and the night with gold highlights enhance the story within the poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review, I really appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Beautiful poem, elegant presentation and such an awesome everything! I'm sure I know who you are for a few reasons, but mostly because we share the pride of this grandest of the Great Lakes! In fact the son of best friend from school, designed and built the most recent stylish bridge. His wedding was in the high story bldg with all glass windows to this amazing sight. It was incredible!
So once again Sharon, this whole experience was quite eloquent. Thank you for this great read!
Just a little fyi: wanted to let you know that you were at the party that was thrown yesterday called Lunch with FS Friends. I was trying to add all my favorite women from here and had added all the words to enter it in this contest, but then thought that that would be terrible to drop all those names and enter. So I wrote a new one for the contest. So anyway just wanted you to know you were included. K?
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Beautiful poem, elegant presentation and such an awesome everything! I'm sure I know who you are for a few reasons, but mostly because we share the pride of this grandest of the Great Lakes! In fact the son of best friend from school, designed and built the most recent stylish bridge. His wedding was in the high story bldg with all glass windows to this amazing sight. It was incredible!
So once again Sharon, this whole experience was quite eloquent. Thank you for this great read!
Just a little fyi: wanted to let you know that you were at the party that was thrown yesterday called Lunch with FS Friends. I was trying to add all my favorite women from here and had added all the words to enter it in this contest, but then thought that that would be terrible to drop all those names and enter. So I wrote a new one for the contest. So anyway just wanted you to know you were included. K?
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for including me...I. honored. Just having you read and comment on my poems is wonderful. Have a very good evening. :)
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Oops, just realized I mentioned your name. I always forget these are blind but will be more careful. Thanks for the review nomination!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
To a Michigan boy now in AZ this is refreshing.
The poem flows well. The rhyme pattern is tight with flowing rhymes. The narrative stays on point. The presentation fits well with the words. The language is warm and conversational. An ode.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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To a Michigan boy now in AZ this is refreshing.
The poem flows well. The rhyme pattern is tight with flowing rhymes. The narrative stays on point. The presentation fits well with the words. The language is warm and conversational. An ode.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I'm so glad you liked my poem. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This poem is the best entry I have read for this contest. You integrated your words smoothly into your poem. There is not one place that is awkwardly stated. The text size is great. The message is clear. Love the orange font on the black background. At the end of the 5th verse/stanza the word toss is misspelled. You have tost. The visual fits perfectly. Drop the first line down one space from the bottom of the visual. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This poem is the best entry I have read for this contest. You integrated your words smoothly into your poem. There is not one place that is awkwardly stated. The text size is great. The message is clear. Love the orange font on the black background. At the end of the 5th verse/stanza the word toss is misspelled. You have tost. The visual fits perfectly. Drop the first line down one space from the bottom of the visual. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I'm always appreciative of hearing from you. Tost is actually an archaic past tense of the word toss, so it works, for me at least...hahaha! I just thought it fit better. Thanks again. :)
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Thanks for telling me that. That is something I did not know. You are welcome.
Comment from Douglas Goff
I live on Lake Huron so I thought about giving you 1 star just to represent. Seriously, nice job! Well written and good flow. Seems to me that you actually do love that lake. Thank you for writing such a nice poem. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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I live on Lake Huron so I thought about giving you 1 star just to represent. Seriously, nice job! Well written and good flow. Seems to me that you actually do love that lake. Thank you for writing such a nice poem. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Hahaha! I've never seen Lake Huron but I bet its beautiful. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
