Will You Remember Me?
a poem for the contest5 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Congratulations on first place! I did enjoy your beautiful presentation and your AABB rhyme scheme! You should be very proud! There were a lot of very strong entries!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Congratulations on first place! I did enjoy your beautiful presentation and your AABB rhyme scheme! You should be very proud! There were a lot of very strong entries!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful contest entry, Dawn. I can understand why it won
first place. Your presentation was superb. I liked the image, the
rhymes, the smooth flow, the video, and most of all the message.
You really put your heart into this one.
Congratulations, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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What a beautiful contest entry, Dawn. I can understand why it won
first place. Your presentation was superb. I liked the image, the
rhymes, the smooth flow, the video, and most of all the message.
You really put your heart into this one.
Congratulations, Jan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Jan. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
If I was he, I'd remember u. Someone so delicate with love as the wings of the Monarch you write of. Well done. ...........................................................................
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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If I was he, I'd remember u. Someone so delicate with love as the wings of the Monarch you write of. Well done. ...........................................................................
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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What a lovely compliment -- thank you!
Comment from jessizero
Your poem was sweet and moving, and just a little sad. If this is nonfictional, I am sure you look forward to the day when you will be reunited. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Your poem was sweet and moving, and just a little sad. If this is nonfictional, I am sure you look forward to the day when you will be reunited. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Unfortunately, sometimes I do look forward to 'reuniting' -- when I get into that horrible space (depressed). But I'm okay with God's timing -- I am in no rush. (Lol)
Thanks very much.
Comment from lancellot
This is very nice, and does a good job expressing the desire for love in the simplest possible way. I think it has all the element needed to connect with the average FanStory member. The presentation is great too.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is very nice, and does a good job expressing the desire for love in the simplest possible way. I think it has all the element needed to connect with the average FanStory member. The presentation is great too.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you.
