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Poetry With Body And Soul

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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I like to read poems that rhyme as I believe they take much more effort to write and rhyme.
Your rhyming poetry has never disappointed me, and I always look forward to your post.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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Another good rhyming poem about a topic that can be understood by all reading it. I love rhyming poetry, but I love more the freedom of free verse. It may not have rhyme, but it for sure have rhythm. Keep sharing and we will keep reading. Thanks!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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Beautiful, JB1, Your poems written in rhyme are exactly what I look for when I read your pieces. There are so many different forms of poetry I can't keep track. I look forward to your work. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from Gloria ....
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What a fine rhymed and metred sonnet with the sound message that poetry with body and soul is terrific. I enjoy free verse and classic poetics and I always enjoys reading your works friend, Jay.

Many thanks for sharing. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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Well said and I agree completely.

Although I do enjoy free verse, I really respond more positively to verses with rhyme.

I tend to write with a pattern of AAAA, BBBB, CCCC, you get the idea.

I feel that the words take on a musical cadence, thus a smooth, rolling read.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your wonderful and beautiful poetry. It is well written. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Thank you for sharing! Good job!

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Jaybird, another good poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on rhyme and poetry. Of special note:

It helps with cadence and with flow,
like music, adds a special glow.

(Indeed, it does add a special glow.)

Well done; well said. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from Aussie
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Well written, well said. Use the Kiss principle *(keep it simple stupid) so many different kinds of poetry that does my head in. I cannot write without rhyme - my song would be lost for all time. K xx

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from LJbutterfly
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I, like many people, like to read poems that rhyme. That may be why I write a review for all of your poems. They really are like soothing music and your poetry flows as though written with body and soul.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022

Comment from harmony13
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The rhyming in the author's words is perfect! I loved the poem - it made
me think how poets like you are so creative. Thank you for the author's
notes - they give great advice! The poem flows and connects well.
I agree with this author rhyming and music as it adds a special glow to poems. Great Poem, Jay! Hope you are doing well!....Maria

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2022