I, You, He or She loves
Amo, Amas, Amat9 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Starving for Love writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements in your unique style.
It's hard to find true love...having a recipe would be awesome.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Starving for Love writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the contest requirements in your unique style.
It's hard to find true love...having a recipe would be awesome.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Appreciate the kind review. Thanks.
Comment from Douglas Goff
So very, very, very good. I would put a light colored background to enhance the experience and draw out the beauty of the script. Your grasp of the English language is fantastic. I bet you are an interesting one to have a conversation with.
Keep it up!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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So very, very, very good. I would put a light colored background to enhance the experience and draw out the beauty of the script. Your grasp of the English language is fantastic. I bet you are an interesting one to have a conversation with.
Keep it up!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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If you get me started i might be an interesting story teller but truth be told Ian more stoic than talkative finding idle chatter challenging. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Dr. Von
This is a good job. The writing is rich with a simile that works the message in a creative style that appropriately advances the flow. I enjoyed reading this piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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This is a good job. The writing is rich with a simile that works the message in a creative style that appropriately advances the flow. I enjoyed reading this piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the positive review. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Once you get used to the fancy script, this reads easier as it goes. I think you do a good job with each stanza giving a different definition of what love it. And I think most would agree with them all.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Once you get used to the fancy script, this reads easier as it goes. I think you do a good job with each stanza giving a different definition of what love it. And I think most would agree with them all.
Good entry.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2022
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Never know where I will go.
Begin with a thought, jot it down,
Massage it gently and hit entered, and save
before moving on two the next stanza.
Go
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Never know where I will go.
Begin with a thought, jot it down,
Massage it gently and hit entered, and save
before moving on two the next stanza.
Go
Comment from royowen
The way of raising a child is to treat them with respect, to always address them with affection, and do a favour for the coming generation, but no it's not like that, unfortunately. I love the change of language, I guess that's where the expression of "poetic licence comes from, great inventive grammar, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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The way of raising a child is to treat them with respect, to always address them with affection, and do a favour for the coming generation, but no it's not like that, unfortunately. I love the change of language, I guess that's where the expression of "poetic licence comes from, great inventive grammar, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really a very nice poem about love in its many flavors. Eros and Cupid have many errors to answer for, but your poem isn't one. Although, your font made this very challenging reading until I figured out what "r" was.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is really a very nice poem about love in its many flavors. Eros and Cupid have many errors to answer for, but your poem isn't one. Although, your font made this very challenging reading until I figured out what "r" was.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I appreciate your review
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. I especially thought the last stanza was good advice but the entire poem is thought and very true. Great presentation and a well written piece.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed your poem. I especially thought the last stanza was good advice but the entire poem is thought and very true. Great presentation and a well written piece.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Again, thanks
Comment from Sally Law
This is magnificent, mystery poet! Please accept my virtual six and high five with compliments. My vote for sure and I'm watching the contest with my good eye. Well... its better than the other eye, relatively speaking.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is magnificent, mystery poet! Please accept my virtual six and high five with compliments. My vote for sure and I'm watching the contest with my good eye. Well... its better than the other eye, relatively speaking.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Do you really not know who I am? But you recognize my style, grace and humor? My density of vocabularies quality? Thank you.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is quite a beautiful piece. It tells of love, love only, experience, and true dedication to detail would it be possible to write about it in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed the read. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is quite a beautiful piece. It tells of love, love only, experience, and true dedication to detail would it be possible to write about it in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed the read. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I am glad you enjoyed it J.C. Maybe others will as well. Thank you.
