Honoring others
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Comment from Raul1
I am glad that you dedicated this poem to your friend Sal. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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I am glad that you dedicated this poem to your friend Sal. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so very much Raul! I sure appreciate your kind words for my pal Sal & my poem!
Comment from royowen
Yep, I've got to agree with everything here, she is a great asset to fanstory, she's obviously certifiably blind, but that's where the blindness ends, so the title "what the blind girl saw", is a great metaphor, beautifully written, in smooth, articulate tetrameter and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yep, I've got to agree with everything here, she is a great asset to fanstory, she's obviously certifiably blind, but that's where the blindness ends, so the title "what the blind girl saw", is a great metaphor, beautifully written, in smooth, articulate tetrameter and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you Roy! I am surprised how many who didn't know Sally. She is however the truest kind of friend, much like yourself. Thanks for your kind words for 'our gal Sal
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Bless you
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The rhyming here is perfect, and I love that you keep coming back to "our gal Sal". I don't know that I've ever read anything she's written, but perhaps I'll be moved to now.
A lovely tribute that you've written to someone that you obviously admire.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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The rhyming here is perfect, and I love that you keep coming back to "our gal Sal". I don't know that I've ever read anything she's written, but perhaps I'll be moved to now.
A lovely tribute that you've written to someone that you obviously admire.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thanks Pam! You will not be disappointed as she is great. I truly appreciate your kind words for my poem. You are the best twin sister ever! : )
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HA! I knew it was you as soon as I started reading this! Twins, indeed:-)
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Oh sh....t! Is there a way to delete my comments? I completely forgot!
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Lol, I think I'm starting to get too excited for us to celebrate the only way we can together! I can't believe I did that, but oh well! Hopefully nobody will see it.
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Lol, I think I'm starting to get too excited for us to celebrate the only way we can together! I can't believe I did that, but oh well! Hopefully nobody will see it.
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You didn't inherit a big mouth too, did you. Hehehe!
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Oops!
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.lol, I shouldn't enter these cause I so easily forget!
I actually think most people just recognize my style of writing anyway.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
I applaud your choice for a Fanstory author to write about. I've been following Sally's mysteries/cold case files about a blind detective, her hubby Jackson, and protector dog King. Sally is everything you tell us. I appreciate her as a Christian who thinks of others before herself. She is a fine writer, rarely making any mistakes in spelling or grammar. She's definitely an asset to Fanstory.
I especially like the repetition of "our gal Sal". It's quite effective.
Thanks for sharing! And good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hi Mystery Author,
I applaud your choice for a Fanstory author to write about. I've been following Sally's mysteries/cold case files about a blind detective, her hubby Jackson, and protector dog King. Sally is everything you tell us. I appreciate her as a Christian who thinks of others before herself. She is a fine writer, rarely making any mistakes in spelling or grammar. She's definitely an asset to Fanstory.
I especially like the repetition of "our gal Sal". It's quite effective.
Thanks for sharing! And good luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Hi Kimbob! As always I truly appreciate your kind review and words for Sally, as well as her poem. She is a wonderful person and a true sister in Christ.
After I got the hang of the 'Our Gal Sal' theme, I couldn't stop at just one verse, and hoping it kinda catches on as a little nickname for her. Thats why I didn't want to use the word 'My' because she is special to all who know her.
I love that you read her work. She will love hearing that as I am pretty sure she is reading all the reviews.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Sal is indeed a wonderful person, kind hearted and gentle.
-You have portrayed her and her innate qualities and personal achievements in a way that does justice to her shining character.
Sparkling in your writing: is Sal
Thanks for writing about such a creative and wonderful person with style and integrity.
Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Sal is indeed a wonderful person, kind hearted and gentle.
-You have portrayed her and her innate qualities and personal achievements in a way that does justice to her shining character.
Sparkling in your writing: is Sal
Thanks for writing about such a creative and wonderful person with style and integrity.
Blessings to you.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Marien, I count you on my list of lovely people, just like Sally. Thank you for your very kind words for Sally, as well as her poem. I hope she is reading them as they certainly tell how much people think of her. Thank you again my friend!
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You are very, very welcome. Thank you for your warm sentiments. The very best of luck in the contest to you🌸
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Marien, I count you on my list of lovely people, just like Sally. Thank you for your very kind words for Sally, as well as her poem. I hope she is reading them as they certainly tell how much people think of her. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You tell the truth in how she goes about uplifting with words of praise, never hazing as many would do. Well thought out and written piece for a FS friend.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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You tell the truth in how she goes about uplifting with words of praise, never hazing as many would do. Well thought out and written piece for a FS friend.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Tom. That means the world to me as I know it will Sally!
Things are starting to look up here and hope to be out of hospital within a couple weeks. Thanks again for your kind words my very very dear friend.
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Comment from karenina
Congratulations on a beautiful tribute poem to Sally Law! I am certain all who read this are nodding their heads and thinking how well you've captured her!
These writing prompts are a very nice way to honor fellow FanStorians!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Congratulations on a beautiful tribute poem to Sally Law! I am certain all who read this are nodding their heads and thinking how well you've captured her!
These writing prompts are a very nice way to honor fellow FanStorians!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much Karenina! I truly appreciate your lovely words for my poem, as well as for Sally! I hope she is reading all the lovely reviews and all the kind comments for her. Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Author, this is a beautiful tribute to our own Sally Law. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
She prays for others, without fail
An asset to FanStory, she's our gal Sal
(Indeed, she is an asset and a blessing to the FanStory family.)
Good rhyming. Well chosen photos. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Hello Author, this is a beautiful tribute to our own Sally Law. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
She prays for others, without fail
An asset to FanStory, she's our gal Sal
(Indeed, she is an asset and a blessing to the FanStory family.)
Good rhyming. Well chosen photos. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Awe, thank you Margaret! I truly appreciate your kind words for our gal Sal..
She truly is among some of the loveliest people here; of course you are included in that group! So thank you again as I know Sally will enjoy reading everyone's kind words! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a wonderful tribute to Sally. Like you I enjoy reading her work, from her Jukebox Hits, to her fine free verse, to her most enjoyable novels.
She is a wonderful and valued member of the community.
Wishing you great luck in the booths. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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This is a wonderful tribute to Sally. Like you I enjoy reading her work, from her Jukebox Hits, to her fine free verse, to her most enjoyable novels.
She is a wonderful and valued member of the community.
Wishing you great luck in the booths. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Gloria, you are so sweet! Thanks for all the lovely words for Sally and for my tribute. I'm sure she too will appreciate them so much as I do.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this!
Such a thoughtfully crafted, and realized verse.
Your affection and admiration for Sal come shining through your carefully selected words.
Your phraseology is noteworthy.
The rhymes are smooth as silk and a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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I love this!
Such a thoughtfully crafted, and realized verse.
Your affection and admiration for Sal come shining through your carefully selected words.
Your phraseology is noteworthy.
The rhymes are smooth as silk and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2022
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Kitty, thank you so very much for your lovely words for both Sally and my poem. You are always so sweet and I know she will also appreciate your kindness!
