Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from royowen
Wow, that was quite a dream, it seemed real to me, an inter stone episode Brett, the dream was quite a chunk in your story, but seemed almost like a reality, I like your post Brett, it really was well written, probably needs an edit. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Trio album that was later scrap(p)ed.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Wow, that was quite a dream, it seemed real to me, an inter stone episode Brett, the dream was quite a chunk in your story, but seemed almost like a reality, I like your post Brett, it really was well written, probably needs an edit. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Trio album that was later scrap(p)ed.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Welcome
Comment from BethShelby
What a nightmare. I can imagine how scary the first night trying to sleep under and underpass might have been. I keep imaging the next chapter is going to find you in the Walmart parking lot but it seems we haven't gotten there yet. I wonder how you boots got off. I seems as though you are wondering that as well. This writing keeps me on edge.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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What a nightmare. I can imagine how scary the first night trying to sleep under and underpass might have been. I keep imaging the next chapter is going to find you in the Walmart parking lot but it seems we haven't gotten there yet. I wonder how you boots got off. I seems as though you are wondering that as well. This writing keeps me on edge.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Wal-Mart is coming up. Yes I did. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
What a nightmare. I can imagine how scary the first night trying to sleep under and underpass might have been. I keep imaging the next chapter is going to find you in the Walmart parking lot but it seems we haven't gotten there yet. I wonder how you boots got off. I seems as though you are wondering that as well. This writing keeps me on edge.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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What a nightmare. I can imagine how scary the first night trying to sleep under and underpass might have been. I keep imaging the next chapter is going to find you in the Walmart parking lot but it seems we haven't gotten there yet. I wonder how you boots got off. I seems as though you are wondering that as well. This writing keeps me on edge.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2022
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Yea! Another second review. Appreciate it.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, I can well imagine the nightmares you're so vividly describing. Being homeless and jus a boy must have been frightening indeed. That yo didn't want to be caught and brought back to the institution is understandable as well. Now what?
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Hi Brett, I can well imagine the nightmares you're so vividly describing. Being homeless and jus a boy must have been frightening indeed. That yo didn't want to be caught and brought back to the institution is understandable as well. Now what?
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Appreciate the review and your insights.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to find out who removed his boots. Does he still have them or were they stolen? I found the Gyro story interesting. My A.J. has a recently diagnosed thyroid problem. As of yesterday, we finally got the right amount of medicine to keep it under control. This kitty in an indoor/outdoor fully armed killer. I feel like I was just attacked by Gyro every time I put A.J. in his carrier. I like your story.
The song has been recorded by many Singers. (lower case 's' on 'singers')
I was convinced a planetary paradigm shift was underway I was caught up in the middle of. (you can omit 'of')
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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I can't wait to find out who removed his boots. Does he still have them or were they stolen? I found the Gyro story interesting. My A.J. has a recently diagnosed thyroid problem. As of yesterday, we finally got the right amount of medicine to keep it under control. This kitty in an indoor/outdoor fully armed killer. I feel like I was just attacked by Gyro every time I put A.J. in his carrier. I like your story.
The song has been recorded by many Singers. (lower case 's' on 'singers')
I was convinced a planetary paradigm shift was underway I was caught up in the middle of. (you can omit 'of')
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Appreciate the nits, your insights, and the review.
