How It Began and Ended
Remembering9 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Seven hundred and eighty days; man delayed for marriage, but at the end, they happily married with very good remarks about their marriage; I enjoyed the read; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Seven hundred and eighty days; man delayed for marriage, but at the end, they happily married with very good remarks about their marriage; I enjoyed the read; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2022
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Thanks for returning and reading me. I hope I never disappoint.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the From Beginning to End writing prompt contest.
What a romantic story, I'm happy for you.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the From Beginning to End writing prompt contest.
What a romantic story, I'm happy for you.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I lived a dream, amen.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A good beginning to ending entry. Reminds me of the old saying "All good things are worth waiting for." Your entry reads more like a poem than an essay. The font selected looks like regular handwriting, so it fits well with the personal mood of your piece. The visual fits well. Wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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A good beginning to ending entry. Reminds me of the old saying "All good things are worth waiting for." Your entry reads more like a poem than an essay. The font selected looks like regular handwriting, so it fits well with the personal mood of your piece. The visual fits well. Wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Thanks, sis. I like good reviews. Pending is being twitterpated should a usable contest pop.
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You are welcome.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I liked the story from the start. Rather mundane, boy meets girl and so on. But told in a rhythmic, poetic fashion. I caught all the rhymes thrown in between the lines. What cinched the whole thing was the very last line, "I am right, aren't I dear?" Sounds like you have been married for years already. Get used to saying that one little phrase. Make sure Mama agrees.
Very good, and very entertaining read.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I liked the story from the start. Rather mundane, boy meets girl and so on. But told in a rhythmic, poetic fashion. I caught all the rhymes thrown in between the lines. What cinched the whole thing was the very last line, "I am right, aren't I dear?" Sounds like you have been married for years already. Get used to saying that one little phrase. Make sure Mama agrees.
Very good, and very entertaining read.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Forty-three years, two-hundred and eight days. Been twitterpated an additional two years four months. I think she?ll keep me
Thanks for reading me
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Enjoyed your rhyming story and voted for it in the contest over all the others. Funny how we always have to check to make sure we are right with the one who is really in charge.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Enjoyed your rhyming story and voted for it in the contest over all the others. Funny how we always have to check to make sure we are right with the one who is really in charge.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Who? Me? M-I-C here just between us
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. It is a complete story from beginning to end. I enjoyed reading the story and didn't spot any obvious errors. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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You have done a marvelous job with the writing prompt. It is a complete story from beginning to end. I enjoyed reading the story and didn't spot any obvious errors. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Even a blind squirrel finds an acorn once in a while ? no errors. Thanks.
Comment from Wendy G
Love was worth the wait - a very long wait indeed! An engaging short story, and well written in poetic format. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Love was worth the wait - a very long wait indeed! An engaging short story, and well written in poetic format. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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My profile warns of my being romantical, and I did it again, seconds ago, satirically with "The He and She of Things." Did you get your computer fixed. Thanks for being patient and reading me.
???? Why are some contests set to end in Jun of '23 or whatever?
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Thought it was you, lol.
No my computer still isn?t fixed. Have to wait for my son to have a bit of spare time, and that could be a while ?.
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God bless Your computer and you and Sunny. :-)
Comment from lavendermoon14
Great job! I love the font choice, it makes it feel handwritten, which really adds to the piece. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work, it is truly well done.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Great job! I love the font choice, it makes it feel handwritten, which really adds to the piece. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work, it is truly well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Thanks, I felt the same Re; the font choice. It simply said "choose me."
Comment from Susan Newell
Fascinating. Very nice story about perseverance and patience. I found the writing fascinating. The internal rhymes gave it a feel of a poem with stanzas, but a second read makes it feel like prose with paragraphs. Almost a hybrid. Very nice
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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Fascinating. Very nice story about perseverance and patience. I found the writing fascinating. The internal rhymes gave it a feel of a poem with stanzas, but a second read makes it feel like prose with paragraphs. Almost a hybrid. Very nice
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
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It was and is a poem on a different page but I created a poem contest earlier this week so I adapted it to be a short story contest. Thank you.
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That explains it. Nevertheless, it was quite enjoyable with all the internal rhymes.
