Resplendence Sleeps (Haiku)
A sunset to remember...7 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To watch a sunset is heavenly. I watched the sunset with my partner and immediate family next to the Mississippi. Love to see the sunset and then gradually sink down toward nowhere. The earth is rotating that's why it looks like it's going down.
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To watch a sunset is heavenly. I watched the sunset with my partner and immediate family next to the Mississippi. Love to see the sunset and then gradually sink down toward nowhere. The earth is rotating that's why it looks like it's going down.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This sunset poem, Resplendence Sleeps, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, displays some creative wording to bring the scene into focus and liven up the text. Nice.
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This sunset poem, Resplendence Sleeps, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, displays some creative wording to bring the scene into focus and liven up the text. Nice.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Well, I understood the last line, and guessed some of the rest, so your vocabulary obviously exceeds mine. Nevertheless, a fine Haiku, and the image is stunning! Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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Well, I understood the last line, and guessed some of the rest, so your vocabulary obviously exceeds mine. Nevertheless, a fine Haiku, and the image is stunning! Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Rufescent is a term most generally associated with botany or the color of living things. And refulgent is a good term for shining brightly but is very seldom used and is very unfamiliar. It just doesn't seem to fit.
I don't think this piece meets the initial intent of the assignment.
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Rufescent is a term most generally associated with botany or the color of living things. And refulgent is a good term for shining brightly but is very seldom used and is very unfamiliar. It just doesn't seem to fit.
I don't think this piece meets the initial intent of the assignment.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Pretty picture, and I did have to relearn two words and find if quietus was a real one. It is. .........................................................................................................
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Pretty picture, and I did have to relearn two words and find if quietus was a real one. It is. .........................................................................................................
Comment Written 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully worded poem. You made me use old Webster, and I loved it. Love learning new words. Your text is large and easy to read. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I wonder how your text would look orange. You have a good entry.
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Beautifully worded poem. You made me use old Webster, and I loved it. Love learning new words. Your text is large and easy to read. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest. I wonder how your text would look orange. You have a good entry.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
Comment from Sally Law
This is perfect in short verse poetry. It cause me to reflect on my own sunset. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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This is perfect in short verse poetry. It cause me to reflect on my own sunset. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
