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Bloody Hill Massacre

Movie Magic

26 total reviews 
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Now the contest is over, I can tell you that I voted for this poem. It was by far the best of the lot. It has excellent rhyme and a lovely flow, making it fun to read. I enjoyed this writing immensely.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this nice review and your vote....both mean a lot to me. :)
Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your win! I can see why your piece won. It was funny, creative, and well-written, and you used all of the specified words. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
    Thank you so much for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Nathan Allen
Exceptional
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I like the heck out of this poem. I have this visual in my head of it being black and white but then some elements of it are in color to emphasize the shock and horror. Looking forward to the sequels!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
    Wow! Thank you for this great review and for the six stars..much appreciated. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Exceptional
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Better off filming a love story lol! I really like the way this was written and the cadence. Need those dark gloomy days for a truly good slasher film!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
    Thank you for this great review, and the 6 stars. Both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Liz Westfall
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You did a great job including all the required words. I enjoyed this piece. The picture and text color added to the ambiance of it. You did a great job with rhyming without it being cheesy. Nice job!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for this great review, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from patricia dillon
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This is really very ingenious. The pretext of a film shoot for using all those disparate words is a really good idea. I am sure I wouldn't be able to keep it up.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
reply by patricia dillon on 16-Sep-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Bloody Hill Massacre, is a fun verse that allows that filming this horror movie is a pretty terrible experience for all involved. I'll finish this review after I investigate a noise in the cellar. I'll be right back.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Everyone knows you don't investigate strange noises by yourself...except of course in horror movies. :) Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from HarryT
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Great job of rhyming and telling a story. The structure works well and the reader can feel the sensory stimulation. A fun read and I would recommend the read to anyone who has a mild interest in the movie business.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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That's what we like for Halloween, Plenty of splatter. I'm sure these are not real films, are they? I have never heard of them, but the plot is the same from one to the other anyway, so what's the difference?

Fun read.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Nope, not real but very much like every horror film I've seen. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. You succeeded in creating a fun and very detailed story about filming a horror movie and all the things that can go wrong in the process. Great job! Hope this does well in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thanks so much for your terrific comments. :)