My Pets
Sharing how it feels to go home to be welcomed by my pets11 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
As a dog lover I can relate! So great job - I think that's the objective of writing poetry. Love the poem. It's fun. It's uplifting and I love the message. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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As a dog lover I can relate! So great job - I think that's the objective of writing poetry. Love the poem. It's fun. It's uplifting and I love the message. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your review and rating. Your comments are very encouraging.
Comment from Reso22
So true! I agree and relate whole heartedly. Though the words don't match in language, the understanding surpasses the capabilities of any human interaction by far. I love this and the photo to accompany! Good job!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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So true! I agree and relate whole heartedly. Though the words don't match in language, the understanding surpasses the capabilities of any human interaction by far. I love this and the photo to accompany! Good job!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your rating and review. Very much appreciated
Comment from Dr. Von
This is a good acrostic that informs the reader about the friendship you enjoy with your pets. This expression connects the reader to a personal preference and gives the distinction between people and pet relationships. The word choices flow the message. Thank you for your insight.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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This is a good acrostic that informs the reader about the friendship you enjoy with your pets. This expression connects the reader to a personal preference and gives the distinction between people and pet relationships. The word choices flow the message. Thank you for your insight.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I must agree with you on the message of your poem. I have six cats and a dog and love them all. A home without a pet is a lonesome place to me. Nicely executed. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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I must agree with you on the message of your poem. I have six cats and a dog and love them all. A home without a pet is a lonesome place to me. Nicely executed. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I like your sentence acrostic poem. I agree that pets can be very important family members. Thank you for sharing your excellent poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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I like your sentence acrostic poem. I agree that pets can be very important family members. Thank you for sharing your excellent poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Than you Jessi for your encouraging review and generous rating.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good effort at writing a vertical sentence acrostic. The font is large and easy to read. The message at times is stated awkwardly and leaves the reader unsure if you like being home or not.
For example, this line seems without any punctuation to be a question awaiting the readers' responses. The last line of the poem doesn't fit the poem requirement. It's not to use a portion of a word to form a sentence but the entire word. You have time to fix it. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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This is a good effort at writing a vertical sentence acrostic. The font is large and easy to read. The message at times is stated awkwardly and leaves the reader unsure if you like being home or not.
For example, this line seems without any punctuation to be a question awaiting the readers' responses. The last line of the poem doesn't fit the poem requirement. It's not to use a portion of a word to form a sentence but the entire word. You have time to fix it. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you Sandra for your review and rating . Your observations and comments fare appreciated.
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You are welcome. I hope it helped.
Comment from Regina Elliott
A very charming and loving
acrostic poem about your
beloved pets. They certainly
are so wonderful to come
home to. May you have
success with the contest with
this poem. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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A very charming and loving
acrostic poem about your
beloved pets. They certainly
are so wonderful to come
home to. May you have
success with the contest with
this poem. Blessings ~
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you Regina for your encouraging review and generous rating. All is very much appreciated.
Comment from Bridge
Very well written. You have done full justice to the prompt. It is very difficult to write given the constraints of the prompt but you have done a wonderful job. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Very well written. You have done full justice to the prompt. It is very difficult to write given the constraints of the prompt but you have done a wonderful job. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your inspiring review and generous rating. Your comments are appreciated and encouraging.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the Sentence Acrostic contest the highlights the enduring value of pets from the point of view of the pets. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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This is an excellent entry in the Sentence Acrostic contest the highlights the enduring value of pets from the point of view of the pets. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you Eugene for your encouraging review and generous rating. Very much appreciated. All the best to you as well.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The artwork was perfect for your contest entry,
Mystery Author. I liked the use of rhymes and the
message you gave readers. Yes, our pets are family,
and a vital part of it.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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The artwork was perfect for your contest entry,
Mystery Author. I liked the use of rhymes and the
message you gave readers. Yes, our pets are family,
and a vital part of it.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you Jan, your reviews are always so very inspiring and your generous rating is very much appreciated. All the best to you as well.
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Thank you for your review and rating. Very much appreciated.
