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Comment from Michaela Moore
Delightful poem about your beloved pet! My love for my pet just sang out of my heart while I read your poem about the love you have for yours. Dogs are hands down the best! And so are the people who own them. ; )
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Delightful poem about your beloved pet! My love for my pet just sang out of my heart while I read your poem about the love you have for yours. Dogs are hands down the best! And so are the people who own them. ; )
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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What a super review- thank you so much, very encouraging.in this world there are two types of people: those who love dogs, and "the rest". Lol.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand computer problems. I have them myself. I fear my PC will die soon. It's old and struggles at times, but I love it. LOL I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I hate to inform you, but Harley is the best dog in the world. Just ask him! LOL Sunny is wonderful, and I wish I could meet him. I know we'd be best friends. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I do understand computer problems. I have them myself. I fear my PC will die soon. It's old and struggles at times, but I love it. LOL I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I hate to inform you, but Harley is the best dog in the world. Just ask him! LOL Sunny is wonderful, and I wish I could meet him. I know we'd be best friends. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Lol. We all think ours is the best! And they all are!
Thanks so much for your super review. My work is all backed up, but it will just be a matter of time to get it back. Meantime, deadlines loom! I?ll miss some story contests probably, but may be able to re-write some poems.
Wendy
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A great tribute to your dog, and a wonderful entry into the pet contest. It amazes me how much you love your dog, and the poem brings that to life with details about his actions and character. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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A great tribute to your dog, and a wonderful entry into the pet contest. It amazes me how much you love your dog, and the poem brings that to life with details about his actions and character. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much. What a super review, very encouraging!
Wendy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is a perfectly rhymed story of your little guy - what his day looks like all the way up to bed time. He sounds such a sweetheart, and I can understand the bond the two of you have.
And he likes eggs? My cat knows when I'm having eggs - over easy so they're a little runny - and she always waits patiently at my feet for me to give her the plate to lick when I'm done.
I was going to mention the font, but I see you made a note. That's really weird. Your challenges continue . . .
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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This is a perfectly rhymed story of your little guy - what his day looks like all the way up to bed time. He sounds such a sweetheart, and I can understand the bond the two of you have.
And he likes eggs? My cat knows when I'm having eggs - over easy so they're a little runny - and she always waits patiently at my feet for me to give her the plate to lick when I'm done.
I was going to mention the font, but I see you made a note. That's really weird. Your challenges continue . . .
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Pam for a wonderful review and six stars. Greatly appreciated!
He was not eating once, so I offered him a whisked up raw egg, and he loved it. Now must have a raw egg before he eats his "proper" dinner. Lol. Manipulative!
Wendy
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a wonderful poem of tribute to your beloved pet, Wendy. The mutual love is evident. It's well written. I wish you luck in the contest.
I understand your frustration with having to switch to an iPad when your work was composed on your computer. Sometimes it's useful to save current work on an accessible cloud (iCloud or Google Drive for example) so it can be accessed from anywhere, just in case. I do that if I know I'm going to be away from my computer for a long period of time.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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This is a wonderful poem of tribute to your beloved pet, Wendy. The mutual love is evident. It's well written. I wish you luck in the contest.
I understand your frustration with having to switch to an iPad when your work was composed on your computer. Sometimes it's useful to save current work on an accessible cloud (iCloud or Google Drive for example) so it can be accessed from anywhere, just in case. I do that if I know I'm going to be away from my computer for a long period of time.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Judy. It?s all backed up on the server, but it will be some time before I can access it. Dan is not well, and also very busy at work, then has to go away ? it?s just the frustration of missing contest deadlines for stories already prepared. Never mind.
Wendy
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I totally understand, Wendy. I hope Dan doesn't have anything serious going on. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I understand completely. Sunny is adorable. I miss my b.f., daily. .............................................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I understand completely. Sunny is adorable. I miss my b.f., daily. .............................................................................................................................................
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Tom, and I?m sorry to remind you of your precious one. Have you thought of making a photo book of your photos of him and with him? It might help, but I know how hard it was after losing my previous one.
Wendy
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Believe it or not, he visits regularly. I hear a tennis ball bouncing which isn't here. His flopping down beside my chair in the a.m., as I begin to write. Adn even feel his breath on my face as sunrise arrives telling me it's time to walk.
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My goodness! That?s eerie but comforting. He obviously loved you equally as much.
Comment from royowen
I'm sorry about your computer Wendy, I know it's a genuine, I've been on holidays using only my iPad, so I know what it's like, but it taught me to how cope without the PC, but you've still written a super poem Wendy, you're a good writer dear friend, excellent rhyming, smooth, articulate narrative, well done Wendy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I'm sorry about your computer Wendy, I know it's a genuine, I've been on holidays using only my iPad, so I know what it's like, but it taught me to how cope without the PC, but you've still written a super poem Wendy, you're a good writer dear friend, excellent rhyming, smooth, articulate narrative, well done Wendy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Roy. What a lovely review. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
(The trouble is I had prepared two or three long stories, and it?s really too late to do them again before the deadlines. Never mind; can?t be helped. They?re on the server, but I can?t access them.)
Wendy
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For another time, eh?
Comment from Pam (respa)
-For all of the computer issues, it looks great, Wendy.
-A nice picture and good presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem for your dog. I am sorry I forget his name.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the second verse about zoom and what it means to him.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-You do a good job showing how much he means to you.
-I think he deserves an extra treat.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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-For all of the computer issues, it looks great, Wendy.
-A nice picture and good presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem for your dog. I am sorry I forget his name.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the second verse about zoom and what it means to him.
-A very good concluding verse, too.
-You do a good job showing how much he means to you.
-I think he deserves an extra treat.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for this lovely review, Pam. It is very encouraging. I am embarrassed about the font issue, and my original poem had other things about Sunny, and was better, but it can?t be helped. (Technology is a pain at times!)
Wendy
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You are very welcome, Wendy, and don't be embarrassed. You noted the reason for it, and I think people understand. You are right about technology!
Comment from dragonpoet
Wendy,
This is a well done rhyming tribute to you dog. I think every dog thinks he/she is the best, at least for his master. Sometimes, I wish I had as much energy as some dogs. I would like to see him play catch with him self. Does he catch frisbees?
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joajn
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Wendy,
This is a well done rhyming tribute to you dog. I think every dog thinks he/she is the best, at least for his master. Sometimes, I wish I had as much energy as some dogs. I would like to see him play catch with him self. Does he catch frisbees?
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joajn
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thanks for such a lovely review. No, he doesn?t play with balls or frisbees, just soft toys. Thank you for your good wishes too.
Wendy
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You're very welcome, Wendy.
Joan
