Hold Me
Her eyes tell of desire.2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Vivid to the point. Hard to review these short poems, but I could review the woman in the picture. (six stars for her). You met all of the requirements of the contest. Nice work, keep it up!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Vivid to the point. Hard to review these short poems, but I could review the woman in the picture. (six stars for her). You met all of the requirements of the contest. Nice work, keep it up!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Oh, yeah, we agree that's why I picked her. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the syllable count. "My heart drums" was a great phrase, too. Thank you for sharing this short poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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You did a great job with the syllable count. "My heart drums" was a great phrase, too. Thank you for sharing this short poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
