My First Day of Life
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
What a great poem. I never thought much about what a baby must think or feel. Everything is new and perhaps overwhelming. Thanks so much for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Hello Author,
What a great poem. I never thought much about what a baby must think or feel. Everything is new and perhaps overwhelming. Thanks so much for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thanks TB. Let's bait a line before it's too late, together. Two olde salts just drifting the stream.
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Sounds great!
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I wonder ? a little at a time. What?s next remains a mystery. How about visiting Adam before Eve came along?
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I wonder ? a little at a time. What?s next remains a mystery. How about visiting Adam before Eve came along?
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Sounds like a great idea, I hope you pursue it!
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. Very original take on the theme of reactions, and it sounds quite authentic. Nicely written and engaging. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Well done. Very original take on the theme of reactions, and it sounds quite authentic. Nicely written and engaging. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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After doing that and feeding our herd of Herefords freshly mown grass, I thought what would a baby calf be thinking. Should I?
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I was so thrilled when my niece was born - it never occurred to me that she was probably thrilled, too. You did a good job of describing a newborn's first thoughts. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I was so thrilled when my niece was born - it never occurred to me that she was probably thrilled, too. You did a good job of describing a newborn's first thoughts. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I remember the moment as clear as a Muddy Mississippi
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I remember the moment as clear as a Muddy Mississippi
Comment from LovnPeace
Quite the imaginative creation. Even the cliche' little pigs went to market was snuck in cutely. I thought it expressed thoughts a newborn might feel. Blessings. Barbara. Xo
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Quite the imaginative creation. Even the cliche' little pigs went to market was snuck in cutely. I thought it expressed thoughts a newborn might feel. Blessings. Barbara. Xo
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I remember the moment as clearly as theMuddy Mississippi.
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:). Xo
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I remember the moment as clearly as theMuddy Mississippi.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Very unique writing from a
newborn's narrative. It's
fascinating reading this. A
strong contender for the,
"Reactions," writing prompt.
Have a good Thursday!
Blessings ~
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Very unique writing from a
newborn's narrative. It's
fascinating reading this. A
strong contender for the,
"Reactions," writing prompt.
Have a good Thursday!
Blessings ~
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Unique, I try to be. One key at a time. Type, type, type until the white is covered partially with ink, but only after the command "print."
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