Vivian on the prowl
A flirting Vivian25 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh thank you for sharing another Aunt Vivian hilarity. I always look forward to your posts as you are able to take tough memories and make them funny. I laughed at your father being hired to pick the beans and also "water" the plants at the same time. But of course, Aunt Vivian had to have her fun, too. But I'm sorry that your dad passed away at such a young age! I'll be 65 this year! He had a hard life and you kept track of all those memories. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Oh thank you for sharing another Aunt Vivian hilarity. I always look forward to your posts as you are able to take tough memories and make them funny. I laughed at your father being hired to pick the beans and also "water" the plants at the same time. But of course, Aunt Vivian had to have her fun, too. But I'm sorry that your dad passed away at such a young age! I'll be 65 this year! He had a hard life and you kept track of all those memories. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you Helen, for you review and very kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from LovnPeace
This is a charming story with a sad undertone. Your authors noted veryfy that feeling. Lonlyness and aging is it;s own hardship. I can even understand Vivian. Well done. Blessings, Barbara. Xo
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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This is a charming story with a sad undertone. Your authors noted veryfy that feeling. Lonlyness and aging is it;s own hardship. I can even understand Vivian. Well done. Blessings, Barbara. Xo
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you Barbara for your review, understanding and kindness.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from PENofFIRE
I loved this story. Your description of Vivian was priceless. Your dad must have been a kind man to take this personal abuse without complaining. Love the last line, a great way to end this story.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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I loved this story. Your description of Vivian was priceless. Your dad must have been a kind man to take this personal abuse without complaining. Love the last line, a great way to end this story.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your very kind words and review. It is greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Wow, your dad passed away at a young age, Mary. I enjoyed
reading your contest entry. You gave readers great details to
show how obnoxious Vivian really was. Your dad was to kind
to her. I could see everything you mentioned from the description
of your dad picking the beans to the chair crashing to the ground.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Wow, your dad passed away at a young age, Mary. I enjoyed
reading your contest entry. You gave readers great details to
show how obnoxious Vivian really was. Your dad was to kind
to her. I could see everything you mentioned from the description
of your dad picking the beans to the chair crashing to the ground.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you Jan. I truly appreciate your review and very kind words.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Not sure if this was "Family Fiction" or "Family Biography," but it was "Family Comedy." The kind of funny that reeks of being true. I have stories from my college baseball team that I think I could put into something really funny, and they are all true. You have given me a really good idea!
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Not sure if this was "Family Fiction" or "Family Biography," but it was "Family Comedy." The kind of funny that reeks of being true. I have stories from my college baseball team that I think I could put into something really funny, and they are all true. You have given me a really good idea!
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you Tom. I appreciate your review. I am glad that you got an idea from this story.
Best wishes,
Mary
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I posted my baseball story called Screwballs, for which I got the idea by reading Vivian on the Prowl. :-)
