Mother Nature Provides
Flora and fauna thankful for rain.3 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Harry,
Pleased to share the podium with you. Do like the alliteration flourish in your first line.
We have a lot to be thankful for in using similar themes.
Mark
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
Harry,
Pleased to share the podium with you. Do like the alliteration flourish in your first line.
We have a lot to be thankful for in using similar themes.
Mark
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Likewise, Mark. I agree with your thought about being thankful. Good luck on future entries.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rainbows are adorable and it is a pity it has to rain first for one to appear and your words bring back the scenes, not seen one in a while as the rain has disappeared, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
Rainbows are adorable and it is a pity it has to rain first for one to appear and your words bring back the scenes, not seen one in a while as the rain has disappeared, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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We use to sing "rain, rain, go away" but now we sing we hope it pours. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated 5-7-5 poem. The message is clearly stated, and the large font enables all to easily see it. I like the text centered on the visual. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
This is a beautifully stated 5-7-5 poem. The message is clearly stated, and the large font enables all to easily see it. I like the text centered on the visual. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the read and feedback.
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You are welcome.