Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery is nice. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022

I need good luck!

Comment from Frank Malley

Good

This poem is written in the Etheree form, ten lines in which each line adds a syllable starting from one syllable on line one. This etheree is a set of directives to a person who wishes to be loving and strong and receptive of the world. The poem's lines are graceful and fluid. It is confident and outspoken. It does not stimulate thought and interpretive interest.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022

Thanks for reading the poem

reply by Frank Malley on 31-Aug-2022

Your poem is very graceful and the words are well-chosen. I would like to have given it a 5, but it lacks the 'aha' feeling that I look for in poems.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

I disagree

reply by Frank Malley on 31-Aug-2022

I guess it could stimulate thought about the suitability of its suggestions for life, or about its conformance with other codes of suggested behavior.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Right

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. You give very good advice. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022

Thanks!