Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I am mildly afraid of heights, too. Yours sounds much more severe than mine, but I can relate. The picture you chose to accompany this poem almost made me dizzy. Thanks for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. You are appreciated.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

This is an excellent Phobias writing prompt entry. Fear of height is a universal Phobia that many suffer from and your write captures perfectly the emotional effect in has on those who suffer from a fear of heights.

Note: You may want to correct the line

I froze â?" my feet upon the step - I couldn't move up or down

Cheers,

Eugene

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I will go back and correct that now.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your picture plus words clearly explained your phobia,
Mystery Author. The details allowed readers to better
understand where it originated. I liked the color scheme
and well0chosen words. I would suggest a bit larger
font and a line break or two instead of one huge block
of text. You also have two stray question marks thanks to
Evil Eddy. To delete--go to Advanced Editor on your edit page,
delete them, highlight, then SAVE while highlighted.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022

Thank you so much! Your reading and reviewing is appreciated.