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Comment from Teri7
You used very good descriptive words explaining all that happened to you that day. I used to like Charlie Rich' songs. My mother loved them. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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You used very good descriptive words explaining all that happened to you that day. I used to like Charlie Rich' songs. My mother loved them. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from amahra
first of all, I loved the artwork you chose for your writing. That pooch is so cute. I was bullied as a kid; I guess that's something that will never end. I think parents simply have to send their kids to Martial Arts Schools.
I enjoyed the story.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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first of all, I loved the artwork you chose for your writing. That pooch is so cute. I was bullied as a kid; I guess that's something that will never end. I think parents simply have to send their kids to Martial Arts Schools.
I enjoyed the story.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Did you promote this. I feel like I'm further into this story but I'm glad I came across this. This so called home seems like he'll on earth. What state was this in. I am enjoying this very much although enjoy doesn't seem like the right word. You have sucked me into this story. Great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Did you promote this. I feel like I'm further into this story but I'm glad I came across this. This so called home seems like he'll on earth. What state was this in. I am enjoying this very much although enjoy doesn't seem like the right word. You have sucked me into this story. Great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Zue65
No wonder the writer is a top ranked author of FanStory. His writing skill is impeccable, the choice of words and his ability to describe scenes specifically the fight between Philip and the main character is excellent. The readers can easily visualize the message the author wants to convey. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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No wonder the writer is a top ranked author of FanStory. His writing skill is impeccable, the choice of words and his ability to describe scenes specifically the fight between Philip and the main character is excellent. The readers can easily visualize the message the author wants to convey. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Appreciate the thoughts and the review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Oh goodness, sounds like a wild place to hang your hat. I have written novels/sequels about an orphan who also was a runaway; she was a frightened girl after her mom had left her at the orphanage, too.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Oh goodness, sounds like a wild place to hang your hat. I have written novels/sequels about an orphan who also was a runaway; she was a frightened girl after her mom had left her at the orphanage, too.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
Glad I came back as I often do miss your stuff that I don't always get notified they exist. It was just as well I decided to come back as this was a good read, as usual. No spags shock, horror!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Glad I came back as I often do miss your stuff that I don't always get notified they exist. It was just as well I decided to come back as this was a good read, as usual. No spags shock, horror!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Do not understand why you do not get notices I have posted something.
Then again, this is FanStory we are talking about. Explains a lot.
Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now, I'm finding out more about why there has always been such a draw for me to your writing. We have a lot in common. I was a nice kid, in a neighborhood of 15 other boys three to five-years older than me, so as you might have guessed, my early years were a nightmare. But by the time I was 11, this sweet and kind-hearted soul, learned to fight back, no matter the age or size. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Now, I'm finding out more about why there has always been such a draw for me to your writing. We have a lot in common. I was a nice kid, in a neighborhood of 15 other boys three to five-years older than me, so as you might have guessed, my early years were a nightmare. But by the time I was 11, this sweet and kind-hearted soul, learned to fight back, no matter the age or size. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Always a pleasure to here from you. Bullying just something I could never abide.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, although I spent my first 2 and a half years in an orphanage, I was not old enough to have those kind of confrontations. I escaped long before that.
How difficult it must have been to always having to be on your guard for those who wanted to bully you. I admire how you handled the situation. You did the only thing available to you. I'm looking forward to reading on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Hi Brett, although I spent my first 2 and a half years in an orphanage, I was not old enough to have those kind of confrontations. I escaped long before that.
How difficult it must have been to always having to be on your guard for those who wanted to bully you. I admire how you handled the situation. You did the only thing available to you. I'm looking forward to reading on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from joann r romei
I do not know why boys do this , I have three sons and they did get into fights, it is a horrible thing when I had to confront parents and when they confronted me,
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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I do not know why boys do this , I have three sons and they did get into fights, it is a horrible thing when I had to confront parents and when they confronted me,
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
It sounds like you were quite the scraper at Hermatage. It's strange how school trauma never leaves us, no matter how old we are. You did a great job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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It sounds like you were quite the scraper at Hermatage. It's strange how school trauma never leaves us, no matter how old we are. You did a great job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
