Autumn's Magical Dream
Fall's majestic rainbow of colors8 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an excellent job with your free verse poem, Bermy.
I love Fall, and your words were perfect. Your words flowed
smoothly and created great imagery. I agree, this season, and
all of them, were created as only He could. True and they will
continue to show His way through the beautiful changes. I liked
the colorful fonts used, and the awesome pictures interspersed
with the text. Your words were well thought out and created a
great picture in the minds of readers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did an excellent job with your free verse poem, Bermy.
I love Fall, and your words were perfect. Your words flowed
smoothly and created great imagery. I agree, this season, and
all of them, were created as only He could. True and they will
continue to show His way through the beautiful changes. I liked
the colorful fonts used, and the awesome pictures interspersed
with the text. Your words were well thought out and created a
great picture in the minds of readers.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I don't know for sure if "The Big Bang" fits into God's blueprint, but it works for this tell.
The varying font colors make this post a bit difficult to read, especially against a light backdrop.
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I don't know for sure if "The Big Bang" fits into God's blueprint, but it works for this tell.
The varying font colors make this post a bit difficult to read, especially against a light backdrop.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from Wendy G
A fine poem about the season of autumn, and you have taken the time to present it thoughtfully with Autumn's special colours. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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A fine poem about the season of autumn, and you have taken the time to present it thoughtfully with Autumn's special colours. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The vivid colours of Autumn is brought to life in this colourful write as the garden of Eden is remembered, the love and the miracle of nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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The vivid colours of Autumn is brought to life in this colourful write as the garden of Eden is remembered, the love and the miracle of nature, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from leather
The illustrations sprinkled throughout the poem are spectacular--the colors used in the text work, except the yellow. That color is too weak to be seen clearly and slows the readers down.
Best wishes.
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The illustrations sprinkled throughout the poem are spectacular--the colors used in the text work, except the yellow. That color is too weak to be seen clearly and slows the readers down.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a beautiful, stunningly presented poem about autumn. Autumn is my favorite season and you really appeased this reader. Loved your multicolor text font. Altogether they look like rainbows. So pretty.
Your last stanza is my favorite. Thank for for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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What a beautiful, stunningly presented poem about autumn. Autumn is my favorite season and you really appeased this reader. Loved your multicolor text font. Altogether they look like rainbows. So pretty.
Your last stanza is my favorite. Thank for for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Eternal Muse,
Thank you for your wonderful review. I truly appreciate and value your comments.
Eugene
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great. I thought you did a wonderful job. This poem is a joy to read - colorful and a perfect font. And the poem flows so well. Wonderful word choices. Excellent imagery. Just perfect.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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This is great. I thought you did a wonderful job. This poem is a joy to read - colorful and a perfect font. And the poem flows so well. Wonderful word choices. Excellent imagery. Just perfect.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Michael,
Thank you for a wonderful review. I appreciate and truly value your comments.
Eugene
Comment from Regina Elliott
Such a beauteous autumnal
poem. It has a good rhythm
and cascades down like a
gentle waterfall. My best
wishes for success in the
contest. Have a happy
upcoming weekend. ~
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Such a beauteous autumnal
poem. It has a good rhythm
and cascades down like a
gentle waterfall. My best
wishes for success in the
contest. Have a happy
upcoming weekend. ~
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
