The Interview
Who is the Shulamite?4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This was an unusual debate dialogue for me. Firstly, I had to look up the word Shulamite. Then I had to process why you would make the person in humor ugly. I think a visual would enhance the presentation. The font size could also be larger. The presentation of this piece needs to be better. However, the requirements are met. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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This was an unusual debate dialogue for me. Firstly, I had to look up the word Shulamite. Then I had to process why you would make the person in humor ugly. I think a visual would enhance the presentation. The font size could also be larger. The presentation of this piece needs to be better. However, the requirements are met. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found this very witty, and well-written. It revealed the lamentable gaps in my in-depth biblical knowledge, and has prompted me to re-read the Songs of Solomon at bedtime. So you have also done some good today. Kate xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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I found this very witty, and well-written. It revealed the lamentable gaps in my in-depth biblical knowledge, and has prompted me to re-read the Songs of Solomon at bedtime. So you have also done some good today. Kate xx
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This appears like a self-deprecating dialogue with yourself. Am I right? Why else would you describe yourself so badly?
I would suggest taking a good look at your presentation and ask yourself do you really want others to see you this way.
Jesse
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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This appears like a self-deprecating dialogue with yourself. Am I right? Why else would you describe yourself so badly?
I would suggest taking a good look at your presentation and ask yourself do you really want others to see you this way.
Jesse
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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You are kind of half right. I was really afraid that people might think I was making fun of Scripture.
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So I was half right then?
I don't think people will think you are making fun of scriptures.
Keep writing. You have great potential!
Jesse
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Thank you. In the piece I probably exaggerated a bit for effect.
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No worries. You do just what you want to when it comes to posting on this site.
Jesse
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I'd take a little look at your presentation here. Consider inserting clear lines between your paragraphs, separate speakers. This would help with the readability of the piece on screen.
It's a quirky little piece but generally it works well.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Hi there,
I'd take a little look at your presentation here. Consider inserting clear lines between your paragraphs, separate speakers. This would help with the readability of the piece on screen.
It's a quirky little piece but generally it works well.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 24-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
