The Voice Beyond
Is there a special where all of the unwanted children go?17 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent story. The descriptions are lovely, and the dialogue is perfect and believable. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your writing. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Excellent story. The descriptions are lovely, and the dialogue is perfect and believable. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your writing. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Wendy G
Very well written and extremely moving. I felt it was a picture of the heavenly Father caring for the little ones. Your story was engaging and the reader could imagine the details very well. Congratulations on being nominated for the story of the month. Best wishes for the voting.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Very well written and extremely moving. I felt it was a picture of the heavenly Father caring for the little ones. Your story was engaging and the reader could imagine the details very well. Congratulations on being nominated for the story of the month. Best wishes for the voting.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Hi, Wendy. That was two years ago. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from derek campbell
Damn You killing it man that should be on shelves I'm likeing what your throwing down you gotta keep those emotions rocking very good work thanks for shareing
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Damn You killing it man that should be on shelves I'm likeing what your throwing down you gotta keep those emotions rocking very good work thanks for shareing
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Hi, Derek. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely, spiritual story. To me it's a vision of Heaven. May the Lord bring everyone to that place where they can be cared for by the Teacher Jesus.
Congratulations on being selected for the Story of the Month! Best wishes in it!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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This is a lovely, spiritual story. To me it's a vision of Heaven. May the Lord bring everyone to that place where they can be cared for by the Teacher Jesus.
Congratulations on being selected for the Story of the Month! Best wishes in it!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. I was stunned when nominated, but Sally or Ric's piece will win. I love them both. Thank you for your kind words and best wishes!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful story. I am sure that your story has given us a view into Heaven, where the souls of all these children have found a place of peace and rest. Jesus loves the children.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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What a beautiful story. I am sure that your story has given us a view into Heaven, where the souls of all these children have found a place of peace and rest. Jesus loves the children.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi, Anne. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You are welcome
Comment from Sanku
I loved the sentimental and otherworldly tone of this post .The question at the end of it is thought provoking .may be God takes care of those souls .I enjoyed the mystic and surreal nature of this .As I read this I thought i could hear that song....
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I loved the sentimental and otherworldly tone of this post .The question at the end of it is thought provoking .may be God takes care of those souls .I enjoyed the mystic and surreal nature of this .As I read this I thought i could hear that song....
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes we have to wonder what's real and what isn't in a whole that has come to making little sense. And thinking on your comment at the bottom of your story, I think the good Lord is looking after those unfortunate children, and they have been allowed to bypass the hurt and disappointment in life on this earth to be seated at the right hand of God. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Sometimes we have to wonder what's real and what isn't in a whole that has come to making little sense. And thinking on your comment at the bottom of your story, I think the good Lord is looking after those unfortunate children, and they have been allowed to bypass the hurt and disappointment in life on this earth to be seated at the right hand of God. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Hi, Ric. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed you supernatural story. You told it in a way that sounded real. I know that is a lot of women who would feel the same way Toni feels and has hearts that are filled with love.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed you supernatural story. You told it in a way that sounded real. I know that is a lot of women who would feel the same way Toni feels and has hearts that are filled with love.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Very beautiful sentiment here, Mike. I enjoyed the tale. In case you don't recall, we traded words about the Montgomery Biscuits. Your story is more profound than mine was.
All the best.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Very beautiful sentiment here, Mike. I enjoyed the tale. In case you don't recall, we traded words about the Montgomery Biscuits. Your story is more profound than mine was.
All the best.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Hi, Thomas. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from sunnilicious
That was a beautiful story. Nice musing. Good details with narration and dialogue. All children born should be loved and cared for... I don't even want to think about any other thing transpiring. Sad story colored with love. Wonderful work :)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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That was a beautiful story. Nice musing. Good details with narration and dialogue. All children born should be loved and cared for... I don't even want to think about any other thing transpiring. Sad story colored with love. Wonderful work :)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike