Fifteen Casseroles
5/7/4 Senryu10 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I always feel guilty partaking in the "after funeral" luncheon. But it is a good thing actually. It offers a time of healing for those who are most affected by the loss. It also gives a family a once in a seldom opportunity to get reacquainted.
2nd line: I THINK you meant to say (condolences)?
Yes, hard to swallow but necessary.
Nice thought.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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I always feel guilty partaking in the "after funeral" luncheon. But it is a good thing actually. It offers a time of healing for those who are most affected by the loss. It also gives a family a once in a seldom opportunity to get reacquainted.
2nd line: I THINK you meant to say (condolences)?
Yes, hard to swallow but necessary.
Nice thought.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Gary, thank you very much for your time and correction, English is my second language and sometimes i make mistakes. I always appreciate constructive criticism. Thank you!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is a poem that many can/will relate to.
Of special note:
hard to swallow
(Funeral are tough. Emotions run high. Many times, there are a lot of things hard to swallow other than the food.)
Well done. Good wordplay on swallow. Great photo choice.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy, this is a poem that many can/will relate to.
Of special note:
hard to swallow
(Funeral are tough. Emotions run high. Many times, there are a lot of things hard to swallow other than the food.)
Well done. Good wordplay on swallow. Great photo choice.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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Margaret, you are very kind. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poems.
Gypsy hugs!
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Gypsy, my daughter and grandchildren were here. I was so backed up. I tried to catch-up on everyone.
Margaret ~ LB
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and "mixed with condolences," it a very meaninful and impactful turn of phrase----perfectly captures the nature of funerals
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and "mixed with condolences," it a very meaninful and impactful turn of phrase----perfectly captures the nature of funerals
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Yes, you got it, Mike, thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. (*=*)
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from aryr
This was indeed a great senryu, Gypsy. I guess a wake would be like a funeral reception and of course includes casseroles, all fifteen of them. I liked the picture of people gathering around the serving table. Your words were offered with condolences. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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This was indeed a great senryu, Gypsy. I guess a wake would be like a funeral reception and of course includes casseroles, all fifteen of them. I liked the picture of people gathering around the serving table. Your words were offered with condolences. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a lovely day. Blessed be (*=*)
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." ?Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this Senryu - clever connection to humorous theme lol - have actually attend a couple of these in my time- can't ever go wrong with a good Italian casserole! Swallowing the performances of the women they would hire to cry at the open casket - was indeed a bit much to swallow -name for them- don't remember- good job
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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I like this Senryu - clever connection to humorous theme lol - have actually attend a couple of these in my time- can't ever go wrong with a good Italian casserole! Swallowing the performances of the women they would hire to cry at the open casket - was indeed a bit much to swallow -name for them- don't remember- good job
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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You got an interesting view of my haiku. I was thinking funeral receptions in America. Many times the disease just wants to be left alone in their grief, even if family and friends mean well.
Thank you very much, my friend. It's always good to hear from you. Good night or morning... wherever you may be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Yes, the feelings expressed following a funeral are ably summed up in your last two lines. Of course, I like your c-letter alliteration. I also like your 'mixed with' phrase.
Mark
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Gypsy,
Yes, the feelings expressed following a funeral are ably summed up in your last two lines. Of course, I like your c-letter alliteration. I also like your 'mixed with' phrase.
Mark
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
So true - no matter the good intentions of the food. The pain and grief of losing a loved one makes the food "hard to swallow." But my husband hates anything called "casserole" so even if it's not for a funeral, he'd find it hard to swallow!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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So true - no matter the good intentions of the food. The pain and grief of losing a loved one makes the food "hard to swallow." But my husband hates anything called "casserole" so even if it's not for a funeral, he'd find it hard to swallow!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Helen, thank you very much for your time and kind review. Hugs!
MariVal
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from royowen
How brilliant is this? This is a marvellous metaphor, but not only that working in that very subtle ambiguity is very special, well done Gypsy, you're a wonder girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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How brilliant is this? This is a marvellous metaphor, but not only that working in that very subtle ambiguity is very special, well done Gypsy, you're a wonder girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Roy, thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
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Welcome Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was very poignant, and very evokative. Who wants all these expressions of sympathy. People just want to grieve. In England people bring flowers. I was horrified by the number of vases I had to deal with twice a day when Mum passed away this spring. Kate xx
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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This was very poignant, and very evokative. Who wants all these expressions of sympathy. People just want to grieve. In England people bring flowers. I was horrified by the number of vases I had to deal with twice a day when Mum passed away this spring. Kate xx
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
Comment from jessizero
I remember people brought food when my grandfather died, but no one brought casseroles. Your poem really captured the feeling, though. It really is "hard to swallow." You have a gift with phrases. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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I remember people brought food when my grandfather died, but no one brought casseroles. Your poem really captured the feeling, though. It really is "hard to swallow." You have a gift with phrases. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason". --Novalis
