Eavesdropping
Just for Fun36 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
I can't take anything hot. I guess I'm too dull and boring, but that's okay with me. You did a great job, and I enjoyed your story. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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I can't take anything hot. I guess I'm too dull and boring, but that's okay with me. You did a great job, and I enjoyed your story. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Shirley, thank you for reading! Terry.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This WAS fun. I knew it wasn't going to be what comes to mind when you speak of the woman taking the lead or hurting the male ego. But I couldn't wait to find out exactly what this couple was actually talking about. Cornbread. Lol.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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This WAS fun. I knew it wasn't going to be what comes to mind when you speak of the woman taking the lead or hurting the male ego. But I couldn't wait to find out exactly what this couple was actually talking about. Cornbread. Lol.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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LJB, LOL, thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from royowen
I had to have a giggle at this one Terry, the only thing I didn't really expect it to be goubg in the suspected way, but I did expect a surprise and that, my friend, I couldn't pick, well done, this is a winner, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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I had to have a giggle at this one Terry, the only thing I didn't really expect it to be goubg in the suspected way, but I did expect a surprise and that, my friend, I couldn't pick, well done, this is a winner, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Roy, LOL, I am delighted you enjoyed it. Terry.
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Most welcome
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is hilarious, Terry. What a build up with this subliminal message, making us imagine all kinds of things! Then wham! It's nothing more than the choice of hot peppers in the cornbread! Love it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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This is hilarious, Terry. What a build up with this subliminal message, making us imagine all kinds of things! Then wham! It's nothing more than the choice of hot peppers in the cornbread! Love it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Judy, LOL, I am glad you liked it.
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You?re most welcome, Terry.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ha! I loved this, Terry. You have a sensational mind, and your quipping style never gets old. You had me going in another sensory direction altogether, and now I have a craving for cornbread! (With Jalapenos, though). Loved it! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Ha! I loved this, Terry. You have a sensational mind, and your quipping style never gets old. You had me going in another sensory direction altogether, and now I have a craving for cornbread! (With Jalapenos, though). Loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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John, LOL, thank you for the six stars!!! Terry.
Comment from Sarah Robin
Funny! You made me smile! I commend you for being able to write the great dialog that keeps your reader glued to their seat. That is a real talent. You are a very witty fellow. I especially liked the ending. I could hardly wait for the punch line. Thanks for an enjoyable read. Sarah
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Funny! You made me smile! I commend you for being able to write the great dialog that keeps your reader glued to their seat. That is a real talent. You are a very witty fellow. I especially liked the ending. I could hardly wait for the punch line. Thanks for an enjoyable read. Sarah
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Sarah, thank you, LOL, I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Comment from Susan Newell
Terry,
This is a great little piece of all-dialogue flash. You tried really jard to lead us down the wrong road and certainly created intrigue. I thought things might bet hot. And I was right!
Sue
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Terry,
This is a great little piece of all-dialogue flash. You tried really jard to lead us down the wrong road and certainly created intrigue. I thought things might bet hot. And I was right!
Sue
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Sue, LOL, thank you. Terry.
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I can't believe the typos in my review. Damn iPad.
Comment from Spitfire
Good one. Of course, the reader thinks it's a husband and wife talking about sex which made the dialogue hilarious. I imagine the habanero peppers would be painful to the tummy.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Good one. Of course, the reader thinks it's a husband and wife talking about sex which made the dialogue hilarious. I imagine the habanero peppers would be painful to the tummy.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Spitfire, LOL, and those peppers are hot in the mouth! Thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a tremendous flash fiction. I was fooled right to the end and beyond. Therefore I was forced to divert my last six star that was destined for elsewhere... This will come back to haunt me I'm sure. But worth it. It would of course have made a terrific dialogue only contest entry... I can't help wondering whether it was a bit wasted on a 'for fun' entry. But yes, it really was fun. Kate xx
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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This is a tremendous flash fiction. I was fooled right to the end and beyond. Therefore I was forced to divert my last six star that was destined for elsewhere... This will come back to haunt me I'm sure. But worth it. It would of course have made a terrific dialogue only contest entry... I can't help wondering whether it was a bit wasted on a 'for fun' entry. But yes, it really was fun. Kate xx
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Kate, LOL, and thank you very much for the six stars!!! Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This left me in a daze until I asked my missus to read it and only after she gave her take, did the elevator reach the penthouse. ......................it was about cooking not sex.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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This left me in a daze until I asked my missus to read it and only after she gave her take, did the elevator reach the penthouse. ......................it was about cooking not sex.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Tom, LOL, I don't know whether to believe or not! Thanks for reading and getting the Mrs. to read too. Terry.
