Eavesdropping
Just for Fun36 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
lol, I enjoyed being taken down the garden path before the reveal of what they're actually discussing. I like that it's down to where the reader's mind resides, how rude or not this is. Nice :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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lol, I enjoyed being taken down the garden path before the reveal of what they're actually discussing. I like that it's down to where the reader's mind resides, how rude or not this is. Nice :-)
Mike
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Mike, LOL, thanks, Terry.
Comment from WLHall
You had be going there. It was quite a surprise to find out it was only a disagreement about how to make cornbread. Creative and enjoyable to read. I know the difference between a jalapeño vs an habanero pepper first hand. I lost the bet. Talk about painful. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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You had be going there. It was quite a surprise to find out it was only a disagreement about how to make cornbread. Creative and enjoyable to read. I know the difference between a jalapeño vs an habanero pepper first hand. I lost the bet. Talk about painful. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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LOL, thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from karenina
Okay... You got me!
(Smirk)
So I think that famous Marilyn pose was from "The Seven Year Itch."--- although in this case you subliminally remind me she also starred in " Some Like it Hot!"
(That wasn't about cornbread either you clever writer you!)
I'll never look at cornbread quite the same!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Okay... You got me!
(Smirk)
So I think that famous Marilyn pose was from "The Seven Year Itch."--- although in this case you subliminally remind me she also starred in " Some Like it Hot!"
(That wasn't about cornbread either you clever writer you!)
I'll never look at cornbread quite the same!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Karenina, some do like it hot! LOL, Terry.
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Giggle...
Comment from bob cullen
Love the ending and what an amazing photo of Marilyn. This piece took me back to my own days of naivety. I tried so hard to keep up with the cool kids, but I was such a relic. And as such I became the target of so many set-ups. Thank you for reminding of my humiliating past.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Love the ending and what an amazing photo of Marilyn. This piece took me back to my own days of naivety. I tried so hard to keep up with the cool kids, but I was such a relic. And as such I became the target of so many set-ups. Thank you for reminding of my humiliating past.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Bob, I did not mean to bring up bad memories, try some Jalapeno cornbread and a Corna. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! This is cute! You didn't let the reader in about the context of the conversation so we were in the dark and with that picture of the Marilyn Monroe statue, you led us astray from cornbread! I think this should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Lol! This is cute! You didn't let the reader in about the context of the conversation so we were in the dark and with that picture of the Marilyn Monroe statue, you led us astray from cornbread! I think this should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Helen, LOL just for fun. Terry.
Comment from Wendy G
I knew it would not be about sex, because I could see that was what you were wanting the reader to think. However I did not expect it to be about cornbread and cooking! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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I knew it would not be about sex, because I could see that was what you were wanting the reader to think. However I did not expect it to be about cornbread and cooking! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Wendy, LOL, that was just for fun. Terry.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very amusing. You do a great job of giving the reader an idea of what you are talking about, Oh so politely, and then hit us with over-spiced cornbread. You can always give me an evening giggle. Thanks.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Very amusing. You do a great job of giving the reader an idea of what you are talking about, Oh so politely, and then hit us with over-spiced cornbread. You can always give me an evening giggle. Thanks.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Carol, LOl, that was just for fun. Terry.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Very clever!!!
You are quite the flash writer!
You led the reader to think, naturally, that the couple was discussing sex, only to learn that they are in the kitchen baking!!!
Love this !!
This wee story made me smile, thank you for that:)
The photo was the absolutely perfect choice.
Well done Terry!!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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Very clever!!!
You are quite the flash writer!
You led the reader to think, naturally, that the couple was discussing sex, only to learn that they are in the kitchen baking!!!
Love this !!
This wee story made me smile, thank you for that:)
The photo was the absolutely perfect choice.
Well done Terry!!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
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LOL, you are very kind, thank you. Terry.
Comment from Jay Squires
Jalapeno cornbread would be too stout for my blood. Aren't habaneros even hotter? Now ... I'm going to assume (and thereby keep your reputation unsullied) that the cornbread was to be eaten in the conventional manner? You lead me just far enough to wonder.
Jay
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Jalapeno cornbread would be too stout for my blood. Aren't habaneros even hotter? Now ... I'm going to assume (and thereby keep your reputation unsullied) that the cornbread was to be eaten in the conventional manner? You lead me just far enough to wonder.
Jay
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Jay, LOL, yes, Habaneros are much hotter than Jalapeno! Get your dirty mind out of the gutter, LOL, Terry.
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Yes, it goes there automatically, and I have to remind myself there is a clean side of everything.
Comment from nomi338
When you do not know the subject, almost any conversation can sound or seem salacious. This is especially true if you have the mindset to fuel the thoughts running wild in your dirty mind. :))
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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When you do not know the subject, almost any conversation can sound or seem salacious. This is especially true if you have the mindset to fuel the thoughts running wild in your dirty mind. :))
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Nomi, You are right, thanks for reading! Terry.
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Given the provocative photo of Marilyn Monroe taken from one of my all time favorite moves, "The Seven Year Itch" It did not take much to send my mind spiraling down that path.
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You and Jay Squires and Tom Hornzy, LOL.
