You Are, Are You?
I am special.5 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet,
You now have 4 votes.
I love the way you approached this contest.
There are some people that have more than one gift like my mother.
She was not only beautiful but she had brains, was a successful business woman, she could paint and sculpture , she spoke 4 languages, she was an excellent decorator and list go on. She was very creative , inspiring person.
Most of us have one or two things we excel in.
I have always been good at sports and in arts , I enjoy decorating objects in wood (pyrography in detail )
My favourite subjects are animals and flora.
I would like to have a lovely voice but I'm tone deaf but that doesn't stop me to sing out load now and then when I play my father s record player and the amplifiers blast , love our vinyls. ( biggrin)
PS: there is a thunderstorm here now.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Ciao poet,
You now have 4 votes.
I love the way you approached this contest.
There are some people that have more than one gift like my mother.
She was not only beautiful but she had brains, was a successful business woman, she could paint and sculpture , she spoke 4 languages, she was an excellent decorator and list go on. She was very creative , inspiring person.
Most of us have one or two things we excel in.
I have always been good at sports and in arts , I enjoy decorating objects in wood (pyrography in detail )
My favourite subjects are animals and flora.
I would like to have a lovely voice but I'm tone deaf but that doesn't stop me to sing out load now and then when I play my father s record player and the amplifiers blast , love our vinyls. ( biggrin)
PS: there is a thunderstorm here now.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Whoever you are, I just love you! You are what this world needs more of, and who I try to be myself. You are a gem to all who know you and am sure if we are not friends already, I most certainly want to be! You are a blessing to those around you and I am so honored to meet your acquaintance! So beautiful!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Whoever you are, I just love you! You are what this world needs more of, and who I try to be myself. You are a gem to all who know you and am sure if we are not friends already, I most certainly want to be! You are a blessing to those around you and I am so honored to meet your acquaintance! So beautiful!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thanks! This really is a beautiful poem? I tried. I think you organized the write a response to a poem contest. I was not sure how to write it.
Yes, we are friends .
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
This is a unique form of poem. Very repetitive but very interesting. It requires a great deal of self-reflecting. You did very well with it. I think I may know you already.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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This is a unique form of poem. Very repetitive but very interesting. It requires a great deal of self-reflecting. You did very well with it. I think I may know you already.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from jessizero
The fear of heights part is "you are" and not "you are not," so it doesn't go with the rest of the stanza. Maybe you could say "you are not someone who isn't afraid of heights" or something. Of course, it is your poem and you can do whatever you want. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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The fear of heights part is "you are" and not "you are not," so it doesn't go with the rest of the stanza. Maybe you could say "you are not someone who isn't afraid of heights" or something. Of course, it is your poem and you can do whatever you want. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Welcome.
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It goes with the stanza. I won't fly a plane cause I am afraid of heights
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Not what I meant. I just meant the format, not the content. The content fits.
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Ok
Comment from Regina Elliott
Very uplifting and confident
poem. It's breezy and melodious. My very best wishes for the contest, this is
a worthy contender. May your
weekend be tranquil and
creative. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Very uplifting and confident
poem. It's breezy and melodious. My very best wishes for the contest, this is
a worthy contender. May your
weekend be tranquil and
creative. Blessings ~
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
