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This Life is Yours13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely message in your Rictameter poem! I especially liked:
"your reach for the stars is closer each night
for dreams emerge when daylight shines"
You take us from night to daylight and reaching for our goals with such positivity and optimism. Congratulations on your prize!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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What a lovely message in your Rictameter poem! I especially liked:
"your reach for the stars is closer each night
for dreams emerge when daylight shines"
You take us from night to daylight and reaching for our goals with such positivity and optimism. Congratulations on your prize!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much, this one's an oldie, it is so nice to past works recognized and encouraged, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kaiku
What a message. Very good. Live with eyes wide open and take the day to task and accomplish those dreams of yours. Motivational for sure. Nicely done.
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What a message. Very good. Live with eyes wide open and take the day to task and accomplish those dreams of yours. Motivational for sure. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is a fabulous rictameter. I especially like that it a complete thought--and a wise one, at that!!--within the rhythmic/syllabic parameters of the genre. [translation: it was smart and you counted it good.] It's my favorite so far.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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This is a fabulous rictameter. I especially like that it a complete thought--and a wise one, at that!!--within the rhythmic/syllabic parameters of the genre. [translation: it was smart and you counted it good.] It's my favorite so far.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine write about anticipation of life and appreciation of it too, we need to keep out eyes open as there is so much to see, a fine entry for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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A fine write about anticipation of life and appreciation of it too, we need to keep out eyes open as there is so much to see, a fine entry for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
The future holds so much for all of us, those of us who are fortunate enough to have a future that is. All we need do is, as you say, begin.
Nicely worded.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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The future holds so much for all of us, those of us who are fortunate enough to have a future that is. All we need do is, as you say, begin.
Nicely worded.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautifully worded entry. The font size made for easy reading. You message is clearly presented. The visual fits perfectly. This is a colorful and well-done entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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A beautifully worded entry. The font size made for easy reading. You message is clearly presented. The visual fits perfectly. This is a colorful and well-done entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much
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You are welcome. I liked so much I voted for it. LOL
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Daylight comes, dreams emerge, your life has to begin, your reach for the star begins, understand what life has to offer, life is yours, this life is none but yours, begin living now; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Daylight comes, dreams emerge, your life has to begin, your reach for the star begins, understand what life has to offer, life is yours, this life is none but yours, begin living now; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jane Gonzalez
Just start somewhere my grandmother would always say. Begin is just that. To view the world and experience life we have to begin, and if we do not life passes us by. Very well said..
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Just start somewhere my grandmother would always say. Begin is just that. To view the world and experience life we have to begin, and if we do not life passes us by. Very well said..
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are positive, uplifting, encouraging, clear, descriptive
and creative. I found these words encouraging perseverance. I like the
author's gentle way of stating the method. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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The author's words are positive, uplifting, encouraging, clear, descriptive
and creative. I found these words encouraging perseverance. I like the
author's gentle way of stating the method. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written rictameter. It has a Nice overall presentation. Great background colour and font choice. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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This is a nicely written rictameter. It has a Nice overall presentation. Great background colour and font choice. Awesome photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much
