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A story for little ones.
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Comment from
evilynne
That is a great children's story with its own moral. I'm sure kids would greatly enjoy this. If you are thinking of pursuing writing children's books, perhaps you could someone to illustrate. Evi
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
I've thought about that, but it's too much of a hassle. My husband will be retiring soon and he's very good at drawing, so maybe we could do it together.
Thanks for reading, Evi.
Comment from
royowen
What a lovely little story with a built in moral, with that parabilistic theme that Jesus always constructed a foundation for His teaching, but a good way to weave the consequences of laying a poor foundation for a relationship, beautifully written Heather, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
I'm glad you liked it, Roy. Your opinion means a lot to me.
Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and for the extra star.
reply by royowen on 02-Aug-2022
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