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Fleedleflumpus

The first sign of madness

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Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your milestone post! I did enjoy the read. I never talk to myself or my pen name, but I often have conversations with pets. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    Oh, I definitely do that, too. My cat Freddie was just discussing with me why the squirrels in the garden have copied his tail styling.

    Mike
Comment from tfawcus
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Congratulations on this seven hundred and fiftieth post, Mike. A stream-of-consciousness dialogue with your alter ego. I like it!
Despite the rude comments he follows it with, I liked Fleedleflump's definition: Poetry is just your personality finding ways to stamp itself on the universe.
Well, the blank page is a kind of universe, isn't it?
Maybe we should burn these bits of paper over a midnight flame and watch our words ascend into the firmament where they truly belong.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    Lol, thanks, Tony - I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I'm often torn between the profound and the crude, as well as a good many other things that must coexist within a consciousness. This felt like a fun way to explore things :-)

    Mike
Comment from Tina Crute
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This was a fun read for me. I often talk to myself but not this extensively. You may have introduced me to a new kind of therapy! Why do you keep rhyming, Tina?
Seriously, you seem to push yourself to excellence with your very intentional poems. I appreciate your efforts here!
Tina

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
    Thanks, Tina :-). I wanted to write a piece about me but I can't bring myself to do it straight, so I thought this would be a fun way to approach it!

    Mike
reply by Tina Crute on 30-Jul-2022
    Aha, that makes sense! I get it. You're welcome, Mike. Congratulations on the milepost!