Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Zombies are one of my favorite horror genres. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Yours is my favorite you get my vote.

Good luck in the contest,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Thank you for this nice review and your vote...I always appreciate it. :)

Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

Having us for dinner? In the case of zombie neighbors, I don't know just how thoughtful the invite really is. You just may be the dinner. I think I would hesitate on my RSVP.

Yes, very thoughtful...

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Exactly! The first movie I ever saw at a drive-in theater was Night of the living dead! Then my sadistic sister thought it would be funny to drive home through a cemetery. I never forgave her for that. Anyway, thanks for this great review. :)

reply by GARY MACLEAN on 01-Aug-2022

A CEMETERY!?! Now that was just plain evil!!! Even I wouldn't want to go through a cemetery, at night, after Night of the Living Dead, and I'm an old timer.

Shame on her.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Very imaginative, today we never know what to expect when invited to dinner. The days of peaceful and sanity are gone. We need to be extra careful out in the world today. Great Zombie 5-7-5, good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Thanks for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

Lol, nice approach, borrowing a joke from Hannibal Lecter and applying it to zombies - perfect approach for the prompt, and exactly the funapproach I was hoping to achieve.

Mike

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, it's really the first thing I think of when I hear the word zombie... brains! I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, it's really the first thing I think of when I hear the word zombie... brains! I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I found this poem very funny with a dark humor. It is hilarious in how they are having humans for dinner. Gosh, those zombies! Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022

Thanks Raul for this great review. I always enjoy your work, you're becoming a wonderful writer. :)

reply by Raul1 on 31-Jul-2022

You're welcome! Thank you, your compliment means so much to me! you have made my day! God bless you!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your zombie poem was very humorous. It made me laugh out loud! That last line was unexpected. Thank you so much for sharing your 5-7-5 poem here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022

Hahaha.. thank you. It's always nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good Zombie 5-7-5 poem. The visual fits perfectly. I like the text centered on the large visual. I like the text being large enough to be easily read. Good luck in the contest. You have a good entry.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022

Thank you, it's really nice to hear from you and I appreciate this great review. :)

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Jul-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

The poem meets the requirements. The flow is good. The humor slightly dark. The picture fits, but is disturbing. The idea of zombies actually breeding is the other side of eerie. Nice presentation.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022

Hahaha...thank you! Honestly, I can't even watch zombie movies, they're too scary. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

reply by dellsworthpoet on 30-Jul-2022

You are welcome.