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Watching Armageddon Unfold

Zombie 5-7-5 contest entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from SimianSavant
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I have a funny political story about this that I'll have to share with you sometime.

The funny thing about that passage is: if Jehovah's Witnesses are already all chilling out in the sky at that point, does that mean that all the remaining good guys in the fight are going to end up eternally damned to heck? Who is doing the fighting? I am going off of memory here though. Maybe it's a bunch of angels with giant swords. Or designer robot avatar babies with Chucky eyes.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022
    Who knows what's going to happen? From what I gather, the so called 'saved' will already be slurping on manna margaritas in their mansions before the rapture falls. I guess whatever losers are left will be fighting on Lucy's side. With all the zombie crap out there, I figure some of them will most likely rise to fight the bad fight too. Haha. Thank you, friend.

    Ron
reply by SimianSavant on 14-Aug-2022
    I could go for a manna margarita
Comment from Sally Law
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Sorry to have missed this. Outstanding poetry and message within. You're right, according to the Bible, Jesus Christ comes to Armageddon with those who are washed in white linen. These are the regenerated souls in Christ. I believe in the doctrine of the rapture, as described in I Thessalonians 4:13-18. The rapture precedes the Day of the Lord and Armageddon. Sending you my best today as always and congratulations on your ribbon,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much for the great review, Sally. I'm not sure if whoever's left behind will be fighting on evil's side or the wicked rise from the graves but I sure don't plan on being here when it all comes down. I really appreciate the generous stars, Sal. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Your verse is more truth than you or I or anybody may think. Perhaps that is what will make up Satan's army, Zombies. I know I won't be here, but I hope I have a ring side seat.

Very good and deep if one cares to consider it.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
    That;s what I believe will be Satan's army. Thank you for the great review and stars, Gary. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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It's a good entry to the 5-7-5 Zombie contest. The syllable count is accurate. The visual fits perfectly. The text is large and easy to read. Your presentation is well-done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 31-Jul-2022
    You are welcome. I like dark poetry. I write it. LOL
Comment from RodG
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Your zombie 5-7-5 does describe a scary scenario I don't look forward to. Great picture chosen to SHOW them rising. A grim conclusion drawn in your last two lines. Rod

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Rod. Yes, I hope I'm not here to see it, that's for sure. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. Thanks again.