Sunset Kiss
Nature 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is really beautiful, honestly I wish I could write like that. I love the words, the colors, the picture chosen. I wish you good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is really beautiful, honestly I wish I could write like that. I love the words, the colors, the picture chosen. I wish you good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very nice Tina Crute your 5-7-5 the picture is great to go with how the
sea meets sunset's kiss
and how waves goodbye reluctantly
rolls on love's high tide.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Very nice Tina Crute your 5-7-5 the picture is great to go with how the
sea meets sunset's kiss
and how waves goodbye reluctantly
rolls on love's high tide.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
I've often written on the fascinating daily seasons, and even though they appear to be similar, one will discover they're actually, God paints a different canvass daily, well done, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
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I've often written on the fascinating daily seasons, and even though they appear to be similar, one will discover they're actually, God paints a different canvass daily, well done, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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thank you!
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Well done
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the dual usage of 'waves' almost as much as I do the sea meeting the sunset's kiss - what a perfect way to describe a sunset. I thought this was a beautiful use of the form.
Mike
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I love the dual usage of 'waves' almost as much as I do the sea meeting the sunset's kiss - what a perfect way to describe a sunset. I thought this was a beautiful use of the form.
Mike
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
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thank you
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written haiku. Very beautiful overall presentation background and font.Breathtaking photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully written haiku. Very beautiful overall presentation background and font.Breathtaking photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and personification in line one.
-A very good concluding line.
-You did a really good job with the whole poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and personification in line one.
-A very good concluding line.
-You did a really good job with the whole poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, well done. Your 5-7-5 poem is filled with vivid imagery and good sensory appeal. I especially liked:
sea meets sunset's kiss
(Great imagery)
Beautiful sunset photo. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Hello author, well done. Your 5-7-5 poem is filled with vivid imagery and good sensory appeal. I especially liked:
sea meets sunset's kiss
(Great imagery)
Beautiful sunset photo. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you
