Core Values
Needed to contribute to a healthy society.4 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
The picture feels a little bit goofy, and I feel like it might be better without it; it doesn't really add anything, in my opinion. I wasn't sure how well it would read when I started, having a word and then defining it, but it does end up reading well and sounding nice. I think you picked some good values to use, and I like how you changed the color at the beginning of each line to make the acrostic spelling stand out more.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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The picture feels a little bit goofy, and I feel like it might be better without it; it doesn't really add anything, in my opinion. I wasn't sure how well it would read when I started, having a word and then defining it, but it does end up reading well and sounding nice. I think you picked some good values to use, and I like how you changed the color at the beginning of each line to make the acrostic spelling stand out more.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Samantha, I will reconsider the picture. And thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good acrostic. It clearly states a value system. The message is clear. Glad you made the first letters stand out more. it is a neatly packaged and presented poem. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This is a good acrostic. It clearly states a value system. The message is clear. Glad you made the first letters stand out more. it is a neatly packaged and presented poem. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciated. Oh, and also thanks for the tip regarding changing the color of the first letters.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very nice acrostic poem and a great response to the prompt. The values you have chosen are fundamental for a dynamic and well-functioning society and culture. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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A very nice acrostic poem and a great response to the prompt. The values you have chosen are fundamental for a dynamic and well-functioning society and culture. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from jp88
What a lovely Acrostic Poem, and a good and unique interpretation. If I may offer one suggestion, you're using -ing in some, and present in others, and I wonder if it's worth unifying it? It's essentially three lines:
Authenticity - always be who you really are
Love - feel for one's self and for neighbors
Seriousness - willing to be thoughtful when seeking answers.
What do you think?
All the best in the competition!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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What a lovely Acrostic Poem, and a good and unique interpretation. If I may offer one suggestion, you're using -ing in some, and present in others, and I wonder if it's worth unifying it? It's essentially three lines:
Authenticity - always be who you really are
Love - feel for one's self and for neighbors
Seriousness - willing to be thoughtful when seeking answers.
What do you think?
All the best in the competition!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the read and suggestions. Don't have time right now, but I will consider them and edit. Thanks again.
