Summer Storm Rages
a Nonet16 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is a great description of a storm. I love rain and thunder storms, we haven't had one for awhile and I miss it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is a great description of a storm. I love rain and thunder storms, we haven't had one for awhile and I miss it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I love the NORMAL thunderstorm, but I?m glad I don?t live in Kentucky today. Many thanks for your high praise of your No et.
Comment from Bill Schott
This nonet, Summer Storm Rages, has the proper nine to one descending syllable lines and captures the scene of man's attempts to grow facing nature's show of force.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This nonet, Summer Storm Rages, has the proper nine to one descending syllable lines and captures the scene of man's attempts to grow facing nature's show of force.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my Nonet and your gift of stars.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
People need to read this one closely. It isn't just a nice nonet rhyme; you are exposing a dire problem facing many grain farmers across America. While some think rain is the answer to growth, the rains you speak of here are just the opposite.
Nice message.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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People need to read this one closely. It isn't just a nice nonet rhyme; you are exposing a dire problem facing many grain farmers across America. While some think rain is the answer to growth, the rains you speak of here are just the opposite.
Nice message.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Hi, Gary. Yes, the kind of storms Now passing through east Missouri and Kentucky have caused urban flooding and have ravaged farmers? fields. Many thanks for sharing and praising my Nonet.
Comment from Gunner Lil
Excellent writing. An easy read having great pace and flow.
Wonderful sensory description, put this reader in that wheat field.
Good Luck! And Thank you.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Excellent writing. An easy read having great pace and flow.
Wonderful sensory description, put this reader in that wheat field.
Good Luck! And Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I am delighted I could put you in these fields, Gunner. Many thanks for your high praise of my Nonet.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Perhaps it harder than it sounds to create a nonet for what I have reviewed are not shoe in for a vote but yours about farming is as good as some of those posted today. Good luck..
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Perhaps it harder than it sounds to create a nonet for what I have reviewed are not shoe in for a vote but yours about farming is as good as some of those posted today. Good luck..
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Tom, for reviewing my Nonet.
Comment from jaded831
I feel your poem, it reflects the devastation so common these days. Climate change is a real thing, some powers that be, rather line their pockets instead of facing the problem. I really like your entire presentation.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I feel your poem, it reflects the devastation so common these days. Climate change is a real thing, some powers that be, rather line their pockets instead of facing the problem. I really like your entire presentation.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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I am thrilled to know you could feel my poem, that I put you there in those fields. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an extremely well-written description of a violent storm. I particularly liked the part about how the wind ravaged the wheat. All credit to you for the fact that you managed to contain your poem in the restrictive format of a nonet. Kate xx
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is an extremely well-written description of a violent storm. I particularly liked the part about how the wind ravaged the wheat. All credit to you for the fact that you managed to contain your poem in the restrictive format of a nonet. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Katherine, for your high praise of my Nonet.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated Nonet poem. I like the descriptive language throughout this poem. You took a thunderstorm and made the reader see it and made it poetic. Great sensory details. You go beyond just using color. You use simile the winds are like invisible scythes
ruthlessly cleaving. The visual fits perfectly. It's well-written and well-presented. You have a good entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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This is a beautifully stated Nonet poem. I like the descriptive language throughout this poem. You took a thunderstorm and made the reader see it and made it poetic. Great sensory details. You go beyond just using color. You use simile the winds are like invisible scythes
ruthlessly cleaving. The visual fits perfectly. It's well-written and well-presented. You have a good entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for your marvelous praise of my Nonet.
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You are welcome. Weren't mere words. I voted for you and left a comment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your ambient words set the scene here as the thunder rolls through the hills and blocks the sun. Your descriptive words bring this nonet to life, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Your ambient words set the scene here as the thunder rolls through the hills and blocks the sun. Your descriptive words bring this nonet to life, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, Dolly, for your kind praise.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
Love storms and where I live they are menacing.
This is the part that earned my six star review.
winds once softer than feathers
assault stalks of red-tipped wheat
like invisible scythes
Very descriptive..
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Ciao poet!
Love storms and where I live they are menacing.
This is the part that earned my six star review.
winds once softer than feathers
assault stalks of red-tipped wheat
like invisible scythes
Very descriptive..
Keep safe!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Tempeste, I am thrilled you like my Nonet so much. Many thanks for your high praise and those six bright stars.
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Ciao, you have 6 votes now!
Glad to see you are leading ( smile)
Ciao!
