Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "My jewel has no price"Musings of an old man - 2022
38 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Loved your picture and your vivid descriptions were a joy to read. Lovely rhyme and excellent use of alliteration made for a smooth read.
Well done. Happy I have one more 6.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Loved your picture and your vivid descriptions were a joy to read. Lovely rhyme and excellent use of alliteration made for a smooth read.
Well done. Happy I have one more 6.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Janet,, what a treasure you have provided me for this poem. I am so very grateful for your validation of My Jewel has no price.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great photo and well-chosen words to describe where you live and all the benefits that it provides. I miss the years we lived in the country, but glad I do not live there alone now.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Great photo and well-chosen words to describe where you live and all the benefits that it provides. I miss the years we lived in the country, but glad I do not live there alone now.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2022
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Anne, I understand that there is a time for all seasons. I pray my Lord will allow me many more seasons where I live for now. Thank you for your review and comments.
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You are welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is beautifully presented, JLR. I enjoyed reading
it. Your picture is awesome--so beautiful. I imagine many hours
were spent and continue to be taking care of the yard. It would be
an awesome place to spend time communing with nature. I liked
the way you gave your poem three sections. Each one was descriptive
with smooth flow ad great imagery. I liked the description of the
critters that visit. Yes, you have your own version of Eden.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Your contest entry is beautifully presented, JLR. I enjoyed reading
it. Your picture is awesome--so beautiful. I imagine many hours
were spent and continue to be taking care of the yard. It would be
an awesome place to spend time communing with nature. I liked
the way you gave your poem three sections. Each one was descriptive
with smooth flow ad great imagery. I liked the description of the
critters that visit. Yes, you have your own version of Eden.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Jan, thank you for your kind words! Yes, we are so very fortunate to live in such as peaceful place. All important, however, is to remind myself to stop and just breathe in the present moment. 🙏🙏
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Ions the picture. It goes well with your poem.
You've done a good job in describing how plants and trees's reaction to our nature( rain).
I like " dreams of precious fine-cut emeralds
brought to my doorstep," I start praying to make it come true.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Ions the picture. It goes well with your poem.
You've done a good job in describing how plants and trees's reaction to our nature( rain).
I like " dreams of precious fine-cut emeralds
brought to my doorstep," I start praying to make it come true.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your review and good prayers.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You could be talking about my back yard. Nicely done in free verse. North Carolina looks a lot like Maine in your picture. My brook runs into a lake instead of a river.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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You could be talking about my back yard. Nicely done in free verse. North Carolina looks a lot like Maine in your picture. My brook runs into a lake instead of a river.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Paul, you and I both very fortunate! Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a jewel of a write indeed, penned by a truly gifted aesthetic soul - smoothly fluid in its free verse rhythm and striking landscape symmetry - beautiful, inspired and inspiring...
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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In my opinion, a jewel of a write indeed, penned by a truly gifted aesthetic soul - smoothly fluid in its free verse rhythm and striking landscape symmetry - beautiful, inspired and inspiring...
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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eve,I am so grateful that you connected with this inspired poem.
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You are so welcome, JLR, a thoroughly enjoyable experience for me. Thank you for sharing and making my day more special...Eve
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
How fortunate. You paint such a welcoming picture of your back yard with your very descriptive words. It sounds like my daughters back yard, in fact.
Very nicely written and so soothing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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How fortunate. You paint such a welcoming picture of your back yard with your very descriptive words. It sounds like my daughters back yard, in fact.
Very nicely written and so soothing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Gary, thank you she is quite fortunate, JLR
Comment from Tina Crute
I love this for the words, almost as much as the thought! To treasure the beauty of nature, means we do so because we cannot make it ourselves. We can't buy it either, unlike jewelry. This poem has a 'holy' feel to it, reverent and special because your free verse flows so smoothly. I found no errors but just one teeny suggestion that is not a correction, but an idea...
Oh, so still. Take away the exclamation point, so still really is still:)
Wonderful treasure of a poem! You should do well in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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I love this for the words, almost as much as the thought! To treasure the beauty of nature, means we do so because we cannot make it ourselves. We can't buy it either, unlike jewelry. This poem has a 'holy' feel to it, reverent and special because your free verse flows so smoothly. I found no errors but just one teeny suggestion that is not a correction, but an idea...
Oh, so still. Take away the exclamation point, so still really is still:)
Wonderful treasure of a poem! You should do well in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Tina, thank you! You were spot on with this suggestion, for which I am incredibly grateful. best always, 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶🎶
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You're welcome!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are nature based, meaningful, interesting, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on the author's words which express with details
a paradise! The poem conveys a place well loved and appreciated. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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The author's words are nature based, meaningful, interesting, descriptive
and creative. I pondered on the author's words which express with details
a paradise! The poem conveys a place well loved and appreciated. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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harmony, thank you for such a fine review and your validating comments are precious!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The photo is marvelous as is the poem. I like the way you spaced the poem and described the animals. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. The photo is marvelous as is the poem. I like the way you spaced the poem and described the animals. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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barbara, thank you for such a fine review and your validating comments are precious!
