Timmy's Time
Changes come as we grow up, even if we don't want them.8 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a great children's story. I think it is of the level of publishing as a golden book, if they make those anymore. I can just see the book already with bright illustrations and Timmy the hero of it all.
Very nice story. I have no choice but to give you one of my few remaining six-star ratings. It really is that good and fun to read.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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What a great children's story. I think it is of the level of publishing as a golden book, if they make those anymore. I can just see the book already with bright illustrations and Timmy the hero of it all.
Very nice story. I have no choice but to give you one of my few remaining six-star ratings. It really is that good and fun to read.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and generous rating. I would love to see it illustrated. Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Timmy's Time, is a charming anthropomorphic tale of coming of age and accepting and embracing changes. Really liked this one. E is for exceptional.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This story, Timmy's Time, is a charming anthropomorphic tale of coming of age and accepting and embracing changes. Really liked this one. E is for exceptional.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and generous rating. I wondered what the next letter would stand for. I love your version. Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
A very cute story, and a good lesson to continue till he got to letter D: Don't be afraid of growing up. A good life lesson for children. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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A very cute story, and a good lesson to continue till he got to letter D: Don't be afraid of growing up. A good life lesson for children. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your story about the tadpole who refused to grow up to be a frog. His adventures sure gave him some unpleasant experiences. But grow up he did and he was happy about it in the end. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Enjoyed your story about the tadpole who refused to grow up to be a frog. His adventures sure gave him some unpleasant experiences. But grow up he did and he was happy about it in the end. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Imaginative and informative, educational about how a tadpole, interesting and funny, it is a pleasant read, Timmy the tadpole learns A,B,C, and now D, anyway, anyway, he comes to know, changes come as we (like the tadpole) grow up, even if we don't want them; moral lessons taught, nice taletelling about Timmy's time, learning life; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Imaginative and informative, educational about how a tadpole, interesting and funny, it is a pleasant read, Timmy the tadpole learns A,B,C, and now D, anyway, anyway, he comes to know, changes come as we (like the tadpole) grow up, even if we don't want them; moral lessons taught, nice taletelling about Timmy's time, learning life; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from GollyGreen32
Hi! I loved your story. You used some letters of the alphabet in such a creative way, and you created a story about a situation that every child experiences. I liked your ending too. It made me smile because Timmy realized that even though he lost his tail, he received something even better. Have a blessed week!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Hi! I loved your story. You used some letters of the alphabet in such a creative way, and you created a story about a situation that every child experiences. I liked your ending too. It made me smile because Timmy realized that even though he lost his tail, he received something even better. Have a blessed week!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This line will cause the reader to pause. Some know that is true for them too and want to accept it about as much as Timmy. This is a strong metaphor for adults & kids. I was refusing retiring, then the universe dragged me out, with the "we have to let you go" line. It took a while but now I realize how much of myself I was missing. So here I am reviewing and writing wonderful chapters in books. This is an A+ story.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This line will cause the reader to pause. Some know that is true for them too and want to accept it about as much as Timmy. This is a strong metaphor for adults & kids. I was refusing retiring, then the universe dragged me out, with the "we have to let you go" line. It took a while but now I realize how much of myself I was missing. So here I am reviewing and writing wonderful chapters in books. This is an A+ story.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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It's excellent
