Umbrella
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This was an exceptional entry for the Rhyming Acrostic Contest.
I liked your poem verymuch. You got the form perfectly and the rhymes don'tseem forced. I love the presentation. You got my vote..
Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
This was an exceptional entry for the Rhyming Acrostic Contest.
I liked your poem verymuch. You got the form perfectly and the rhymes don'tseem forced. I love the presentation. You got my vote..
Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Wow! Thank you for this exceptional review, I'm so glad you liked it and I appreciate you. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
That's the spirit. A little rain never hurt anyone. In fact, you probably played in it as a kid. No umbrellas needed then. Any day I wake up is a beautiful day, rain or shine.
Fun read.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
That's the spirit. A little rain never hurt anyone. In fact, you probably played in it as a kid. No umbrellas needed then. Any day I wake up is a beautiful day, rain or shine.
Fun read.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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I love the rain, especially when I was a kid. Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Oh I love going out in rain storms! Its my favorite kind of weather. What a lovely poem. I bet all those umbrella users get jealous of all the fun she's having and decide to splash in the rain themselves!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
Oh I love going out in rain storms! Its my favorite kind of weather. What a lovely poem. I bet all those umbrella users get jealous of all the fun she's having and decide to splash in the rain themselves!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this excellent review....rain is my favorite too. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written acrostic with a great rhyme scheme. A great overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
This is a nicely written acrostic with a great rhyme scheme. A great overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words as well. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Fleedleflump
I like that you go from being upset at the weather turning against you to a sense of joy in the beauty of nature - sometimes making light from dark is just a matter of perspective :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
I like that you go from being upset at the weather turning against you to a sense of joy in the beauty of nature - sometimes making light from dark is just a matter of perspective :-)
Mike
Comment Written 26-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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You're right. Life is what you make of it....a glass half full or half empty. Thanks for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is my absolute favorite entry to the acrostic contest. It is clearly written. The rhyme scheme works. The visual with the falling rain is stunningly perfect. Then you provided a second visual too. Jeez! You overachiever. LOL You have done everything you can do to make this entry the best. Where did you get a visual with movement? I must have some for my poems. You have my vote!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
This is my absolute favorite entry to the acrostic contest. It is clearly written. The rhyme scheme works. The visual with the falling rain is stunningly perfect. Then you provided a second visual too. Jeez! You overachiever. LOL You have done everything you can do to make this entry the best. Where did you get a visual with movement? I must have some for my poems. You have my vote!!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review and your kind words. I must admit that my daughters help with putting the pictures on...I'm not that computer savvy. :) when you look for images, you need to type in gif's. They're moving pictures that I think you put on the same as regular images. Thanks again for this wonderful review. :)
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You are welcome. Thanks for the tip. I love your poem and will be voting for it.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is just divine! How lovely this is and so beautifully presented. I feel the cool.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
Oh, this is just divine! How lovely this is and so beautifully presented. I feel the cool.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest
Sally :))
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with this rhyming acrostic poem. I especially love the last line - it's so full of joy! Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
You did a great job with this rhyming acrostic poem. I especially love the last line - it's so full of joy! Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice poem for the contest. You worked the pictures into the body of the poem in a very artistic manner and they supplement the words nicely. A vivid image of a person rejoicing in the rain, carefree and ecstatic with gratitude and praise.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
Nice poem for the contest. You worked the pictures into the body of the poem in a very artistic manner and they supplement the words nicely. A vivid image of a person rejoicing in the rain, carefree and ecstatic with gratitude and praise.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thanks for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from pome lover
very good! a wonderful entry for the contest, and the picture couldn't be more perfect. There she is, getting drenched and enjoying it, and the reader is just smiling (and nice and dry.)
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
very good! a wonderful entry for the contest, and the picture couldn't be more perfect. There she is, getting drenched and enjoying it, and the reader is just smiling (and nice and dry.)
Best of luck in the contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)