A Special Day
A tribute to a special friend named Day30 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice tribute, Jesse, and an interesting name for your friend.
-It's almost like she personifies an actual day.
-You begin with a good comparison with the butterfly and the bee.
-She sounds like a wonderful friend and person who
enjoys life and the people she meets and gets to know.
-I think you said enough to show us what she is like,
and how special she is.
-Thanks for sharing it and have a great day and week ahead.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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-A very nice tribute, Jesse, and an interesting name for your friend.
-It's almost like she personifies an actual day.
-You begin with a good comparison with the butterfly and the bee.
-She sounds like a wonderful friend and person who
enjoys life and the people she meets and gets to know.
-I think you said enough to show us what she is like,
and how special she is.
-Thanks for sharing it and have a great day and week ahead.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Pam, for your generous stars and nice review, but did you find some parts that need work? I think I can count on your honesty, and I hope you will help me out. Please, let me know.
Jesse
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You are welcome, Jesse. I didn't notice anything as I read it. I read first and then write the review.
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I am sorry. I was in a bad headspace when I answered your review.
Please, accept my apologies.
Jesse
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No need to apologize, Jesse. I did notice a few places for a comma. I will get to that later.
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Okay, thanks!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
She sounds like a wonderful person, who spreads happiness wherever she goes, and It sounds like she is greatly enriching your life, which is wonderful. A special "Day" indeed. I have a friend called Sunshine! Hope you are keeping well.
Wendy
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She sounds like a wonderful person, who spreads happiness wherever she goes, and It sounds like she is greatly enriching your life, which is wonderful. A special "Day" indeed. I have a friend called Sunshine! Hope you are keeping well.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
Comment from karenina
I am so pleased you have Day in your life, Jesse. I can't think of anyone who deserves such a warm and caring spirit! She's equally lucky to have you in her life!!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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I am so pleased you have Day in your life, Jesse. I can't think of anyone who deserves such a warm and caring spirit! She's equally lucky to have you in her life!!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Karenina. I am thrilled you think I am lucky to have her in my life!
Please, be honest with me and tell me...do you think this needs work?
Your friend,
Jesse
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I try to always be honest, Jesse. As a short piece of biographical non-fiction, it is lovely! Your tone is warm and honest, and your admiration comes shining through. I noted no errors!
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Thank you, Karenina! I don't know where I was coming from earlier this morning, but I feel much better now, and I appreciate your honesty!
You are a good friend!
Jesse
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NO problem, I often double check to be sure!
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Thanks, Karenina, for understanding!
Comment from Fleedleflump
She sounds like a rare and amazing person - I think we all need at least one character around us who can raise our mood without fail and put some colour into those grey mornings. Beautifully written.
Mike
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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She sounds like a rare and amazing person - I think we all need at least one character around us who can raise our mood without fail and put some colour into those grey mornings. Beautifully written.
Mike
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Mike, for your insightful review. I appreciate your describing her as she puts some color into those grey mornings. A beautiful way to say how wonderful she is, and I want to thank you for your kindness!
Jesse
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Jesse, we all need someone special in our life. Someone who lifts us up. Someone who sees the good in us and the world that we live in.
Of special note:
A free spirit. She's bold and bright as a summer's day.
(How lovely)
A beautiful tribute. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hi Jesse, we all need someone special in our life. Someone who lifts us up. Someone who sees the good in us and the world that we live in.
Of special note:
A free spirit. She's bold and bright as a summer's day.
(How lovely)
A beautiful tribute. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hello, LB.
I wonder why the fourth star? Did you not like something about this post? Usually, when a person gives a fourth star, they tell the author why they gave it. Your kind review gives no notice of how to improve this post.
Please, clarify your response.
Jesse
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Hi Jesse, thank you for asking. It was an error. I will go and fix it now. From my review, you can see that I really liked your story, so I'm so glad that you asked. LateBloomer
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I am glad as well!
Jesse
Comment from Irish Rain
So happy that you have such a
wonderful friend to look forward
to.
She has an awesome attitude, and
such people only make us better
versions of ourselves.
Love your tribute to 'Day.'
Blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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So happy that you have such a
wonderful friend to look forward
to.
She has an awesome attitude, and
such people only make us better
versions of ourselves.
Love your tribute to 'Day.'
Blessings...
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Miss Irish! I am thrilled to see an exceptional rating and review! And yes, she has an awesome attitude and encourages me to become a better person! Thanks for your kindness!
Have a wonderful upcoming week!
Jesse
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You too!! Happy new week!!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Each time she visits there are differences in our world, but we all get to share her. This is a lovely poem about your willingness to see the beauty in the world.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Each time she visits there are differences in our world, but we all get to share her. This is a lovely poem about your willingness to see the beauty in the world.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Carol, for your thoughtful review.
Yes, I am willing to see the beauty in the world and her name is Day!
Have a lovely evening!
Jesse
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very special tribute to your great friend Day who appears to be a carefree and upbeat spirit. She spreads joy as she journeys through life and enters your space. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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A very special tribute to your great friend Day who appears to be a carefree and upbeat spirit. She spreads joy as she journeys through life and enters your space. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Tim, for your kindness. I appreciate this thoughtful review.
Have a joyous upcoming week!
Jesse
Comment from lyenochka
I'm thankful for "Day," too! Although she really seems like a real person who is your dear friend, your poetic prose could be read also as a symbolic and personified character of the "day" when everything is open, honest, and clear. Delightful prose!
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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I'm thankful for "Day," too! Although she really seems like a real person who is your dear friend, your poetic prose could be read also as a symbolic and personified character of the "day" when everything is open, honest, and clear. Delightful prose!
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Yes, she seems like poetry and symbolic yet she is real! Thank you, Helen, for this insightful review.
Have a lovely day,
Jesse
Comment from Ric Myworld
Those special people in our lives, though very few, make everything better than they would have been without them. It would be nice if everyone had one. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Those special people in our lives, though very few, make everything better than they would have been without them. It would be nice if everyone had one. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Yes, Ric, it would be nice if everyone had a friend like Day. Thank you for being the first to review my post. This is a special day all around!
Have a great upcoming week!
Jesse
