Blessed Brother /part 8
Satan's transformation16 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Congratulations on your Story of the Month nomination. This is a great piece of writing, and feel like I missed out by not catching on to the earlier installments.
Cheers,
Erika
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Congratulations on your Story of the Month nomination. This is a great piece of writing, and feel like I missed out by not catching on to the earlier installments.
Cheers,
Erika
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading, Erika, and for the congrats on the nomi! There are so many talented writers on this site. I hope I can stay in the running. Thanks again.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was an interesting read. I enjoyed the conclusion. You led up
to it well throughout the earlier chapters. Now this one is fitting.
I like how the medallion proved to be of exceptional value. The
levitation scenes were great. Your words were created great imagery.
I was engaged from start to finish. I liked the font choice.
Thanks for sharing an intriguing ending, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This was an interesting read. I enjoyed the conclusion. You led up
to it well throughout the earlier chapters. Now this one is fitting.
I like how the medallion proved to be of exceptional value. The
levitation scenes were great. Your words were created great imagery.
I was engaged from start to finish. I liked the font choice.
Thanks for sharing an intriguing ending, Jan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Jan, for a great review and for your kind words. I'm happy you followed to the end.
Comment from karenina
A most creative and satisfying ending for those of us who have followed your story from the first. I noted you posted it but waited until my sixes were replenished, to be sure I was able to reward you for your exemplary writing on not only this final chapter but all of it. How terrific this came in as your Milestone "50!"
(Extra props for not capitalizing satan. As I always say "Little s ~ no respect!)
Excellent.
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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A most creative and satisfying ending for those of us who have followed your story from the first. I noted you posted it but waited until my sixes were replenished, to be sure I was able to reward you for your exemplary writing on not only this final chapter but all of it. How terrific this came in as your Milestone "50!"
(Extra props for not capitalizing satan. As I always say "Little s ~ no respect!)
Excellent.
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Ha! Thank you, my friend, for the great review and the SIX stars. I'm honored. As far as there not being an (S) on satan, Well, I learn from the best. Thank you, Karenina.
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No. Thank YOU!
Comment from joann r romei
This was powerful, I must go back and read the chapters before it, you should be proud to have finished your story. I hit a block, been caring for elderly parents. Very overwhelming.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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This was powerful, I must go back and read the chapters before it, you should be proud to have finished your story. I hit a block, been caring for elderly parents. Very overwhelming.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review. I hope you get back into it soon. Thanks again, Joann.
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a powerful ending and a good one. I always like stories where good overcomes evil. You did a great job, and I can't wait to read the next sorry you come up with. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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What a powerful ending and a good one. I always like stories where good overcomes evil. You did a great job, and I can't wait to read the next sorry you come up with. Have a wonderful Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much, Shirley for a wonderful review and SIX stars. It means a lot to me.
Comment from Ulla
Hi John, this was a dramatic ending to your story . You wrote it with such skill. It was scary yet very satisfying at the same time. I have enjoyed every word I read. I know, I've not been the best of reviewer of late because of personal events. I now hope to be back to normal. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Hi John, this was a dramatic ending to your story . You wrote it with such skill. It was scary yet very satisfying at the same time. I have enjoyed every word I read. I know, I've not been the best of reviewer of late because of personal events. I now hope to be back to normal. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Thank you, Ulla! I'm happy to hear you'll be back in full. I hope all is well with you and down the family chain. Thank you again, my friend.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, some mighty gripping and vivid descriptions. I'll probably be checking the closet and under the bed like a five-year-old tonight before I turn in. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Wow, some mighty gripping and vivid descriptions. I'll probably be checking the closet and under the bed like a five-year-old tonight before I turn in. Great job! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Ha! Thank you, my friend, for the SIX. It won't matter where you look, Ric, I've instructed him to find YOU. The evil laugh is not included, but I will throw it in because you gave me six stars. Thank you again, my friend!
Comment from kahpot
Your writing just captures me and throws me right in the middle of it all, an exceptional read made easier with the font and bold font that give the written word a voice, A wonderful story and I have very much enjoyed it all the way, many thanks****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Your writing just captures me and throws me right in the middle of it all, an exceptional read made easier with the font and bold font that give the written word a voice, A wonderful story and I have very much enjoyed it all the way, many thanks****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Kahpot, thank you so much for the SIX stars and a wonderful review. I'm happy you followed, my friend.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Congratulations on your 50th post. This was a good end to the story, which was quite intriguing and had lots of interesting action and surprises. It's not really long enough for a book but there are quite a few places requesting this length. Have you tried marketing your writing? There are a lot of online sites and some print ones as well as anthologies. There is an English gentleman who has a great site for info, but I haven't checked since before the pandemic and he did have health problems. You might check Ralan.com to see if he is still putting up markets. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on your 50th post. This was a good end to the story, which was quite intriguing and had lots of interesting action and surprises. It's not really long enough for a book but there are quite a few places requesting this length. Have you tried marketing your writing? There are a lot of online sites and some print ones as well as anthologies. There is an English gentleman who has a great site for info, but I haven't checked since before the pandemic and he did have health problems. You might check Ralan.com to see if he is still putting up markets. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2022
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Carol, thank you for a wonderful review. I have not tried to market my work, but will check out the site you mentioned. I thank you so much for your interest and I'm honored you've followed the story.
Comment from Jay Squires
I loved the resolution of your final chapter. There was left the nimbus of "truth" about Christianity's need for opposition to Truth, Beauty, and the Way. You handled it well.
burst into black varicose threads [LOVE that!]
I'm rather confused why you didn't wait six or seven hours to post this so your delighted readers might have sixes for rewarding such a marvelous read.
You write with astounding skill, John!
Jay
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I loved the resolution of your final chapter. There was left the nimbus of "truth" about Christianity's need for opposition to Truth, Beauty, and the Way. You handled it well.
burst into black varicose threads [LOVE that!]
I'm rather confused why you didn't wait six or seven hours to post this so your delighted readers might have sixes for rewarding such a marvelous read.
You write with astounding skill, John!
Jay
Comment Written 23-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Hi, Jay, I wish I had an understanding of when the sixes are issued. But, I have to say a mention from an idle is good enough for me. Thank you, my friend. Varicose threads came to me in the middle of the night, lol. You know that scenario, Jay! Hahaha. I thank you again for the honorable mention.
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They come Saturday midnight (Eastern Standard time) ... which is 9 PM California time. I always post my chapters/scenes about 9:10 PM Bakersfield, Ca time.
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Ahh! Okay, and it has so happened that I've been posting early on Saturdays. O well! Thanks, Jay!
