Marking Time
Rhyming Couplets18 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I just finished reading another interpretation of this artwork a few minutes ago and it was good too. I really enjoyed reading your interpretation. I read some a few days ago and it made no sense to me.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I just finished reading another interpretation of this artwork a few minutes ago and it was good too. I really enjoyed reading your interpretation. I read some a few days ago and it made no sense to me.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you for personal take on this. I am glad the meaning came through.
Tina
Comment from royowen
Yes I wrote something yesterday about the one thing we can't redeem and therefore the most precious gift we can give, and that is the time we spend on others, anything else can be replaced. Beautifully written Tina, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Yes I wrote something yesterday about the one thing we can't redeem and therefore the most precious gift we can give, and that is the time we spend on others, anything else can be replaced. Beautifully written Tina, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Yes, Roy, anything else is replaceable. Wise words. We cannot grab time back. Blessings to you as well. I enjoy your consistently great writing, especially your themes:)
Tina
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You?re a gem Tina
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Takes one to know one;)
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Of course
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haha...what gem are you, lol?
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Well?a piece of crystal anyway
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haha! I think I am sea glass, tossed by storm, shaped by experience and I cannot swim well:)
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I agree, Seaglass was the monica of a very good writer, haven?t seen her for awhile, sadness
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Aw, I don't know her, but what a great moniker:) Maybe she will show soon:)
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Hopefully
Comment from Wendy G
Love this one, Tina! Your first couplet encapsulates the sense of time and space of our present life, but the second one (my favourite) speaks of our spiritual life. The third reminds us to be patient and trusting, as His ways are perfect and our times are in His hands. Beautiful, and thought-provoking meditation.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Love this one, Tina! Your first couplet encapsulates the sense of time and space of our present life, but the second one (my favourite) speaks of our spiritual life. The third reminds us to be patient and trusting, as His ways are perfect and our times are in His hands. Beautiful, and thought-provoking meditation.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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I am glad you liked it. It means a lot when my simple words translate properly. God's so good that all I want to do is write about Him.
I am praying for the flood victims still. I carry them in my heart.
Tina
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done, Tina. Your rhymed couplets leading us home is a fine testimony to our journey here on Earth.
Well done and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Very well done, Tina. Your rhymed couplets leading us home is a fine testimony to our journey here on Earth.
Well done and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Ooh...I sort of wished I had used the word testimony in my poem. Our time is indeed a testimony. I appreciate the thought in this!
Tina
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
God being Omniscient knows the present, the past and the future of God's creation; He knows our state, stand and order of living by degrees going to the eternal and the time when we begin our time of departure from this gifted surface of the planet; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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God being Omniscient knows the present, the past and the future of God's creation; He knows our state, stand and order of living by degrees going to the eternal and the time when we begin our time of departure from this gifted surface of the planet; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2022
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Thank you for this:) My mind has trouble grasping all that He knows but I know He knows my limitations. These words are just the best I can do with my human brain. I always enjoy your reviews.
Have a blessed day!
Tina
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your picture entry poem, Tina! The picture does look like a step into Eternity when our time on earth is over and we can be with the Lord in person! Great rhyming couplets. My favorite is the first!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Loved your picture entry poem, Tina! The picture does look like a step into Eternity when our time on earth is over and we can be with the Lord in person! Great rhyming couplets. My favorite is the first!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you much! The words came to me quickly as I pondered what time means to us here on earth.
Funny, you liked the first stanza. I considered stopping with just that couplet!
Great minds?
I appreciate you, ma'am!😁
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💖💖It was a great way to encapsulate that sense of spiritual reality while we live this physical one!
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Aw, that means a lot to me, your complimentary input.
Tina
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your couplets make an excellent accompaniement to this unusual image. All-in-all you have created a very good response to the "Picture This" club entry rvent. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Your couplets make an excellent accompaniement to this unusual image. All-in-all you have created a very good response to the "Picture This" club entry rvent. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thanks a bunch, Kate! It was fun to write!
Tina
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great interpretation of the image for your club response,
Tina. The rhymes worked well and had a great and true story to
tell. I liked the color scheme and the way you formatted your lines.
Thanks for participating, Jan
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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This is a great interpretation of the image for your club response,
Tina. The rhymes worked well and had a great and true story to
tell. I liked the color scheme and the way you formatted your lines.
Thanks for participating, Jan
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2022
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Thanks, Jan! I hope to do more soon!
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