Exactly My 'Type'
An uncanny discovery15 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
An amazing story.
-Beautiful introduction,
Sparkling in your story: uncanny parallels, author's voice, storytelling and portrait you paint with your words
.-Wonderful story about connections, coincidences, family traits, family ties that bind.
Good luck on the competition.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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An amazing story.
-Beautiful introduction,
Sparkling in your story: uncanny parallels, author's voice, storytelling and portrait you paint with your words
.-Wonderful story about connections, coincidences, family traits, family ties that bind.
Good luck on the competition.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and review my piece. This was a fun challenge, and so fascinating to learn about those who have gone before us. Every life is so complex!
Sending lots of good wishes your way!
Comment from country ranch writer
7/21/2022------11:43 pm
Ironic as it sounds ancestors see to take the same path of those pbefore us or after us.it is interesting for sure great job.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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7/21/2022------11:43 pm
Ironic as it sounds ancestors see to take the same path of those pbefore us or after us.it is interesting for sure great job.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my piece! Family history is indeed fascinating. This was a fun challenge.
Sending lots of good wishes your way!
Comment from TDLRasmar
Very cool story. I would have liked a few of the gaps filled and think it could be worked into another piece. Also, for me there is enough in your story to prove the parallel universe theory. You know, which universe do you want? The one behind black hole #1 or black hole #2 or back hole #3. But, be careful of a zonk.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Very cool story. I would have liked a few of the gaps filled and think it could be worked into another piece. Also, for me there is enough in your story to prove the parallel universe theory. You know, which universe do you want? The one behind black hole #1 or black hole #2 or back hole #3. But, be careful of a zonk.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Hehe, thanks so much for your insightful review of my piece! Very good points! I will try and work more details into another piece someday.
Sending lots of good wishes to your universe today!
Comment from royowen
Isn't that amazing, you really made an amazing discovery, one sometimes wonders if our ancestral roots aren't revisited on we of later generations. This is a marvellous tale of signs and wonders in this great universe, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Isn't that amazing, you really made an amazing discovery, one sometimes wonders if our ancestral roots aren't revisited on we of later generations. This is a marvellous tale of signs and wonders in this great universe, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Dear Roy, how kind of you to take the time from your own beautiful writing to read and review my piece. I do believe in signs and wonders. Families are fascinating and so complex.
Sending lots of good wishes to your universe today!
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Well done
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a haunting read. Almost eerie hearing the echos toll through the generations. You obviously felt the same as you read Bonnie Jean's obituary. I am pleased that the parallels excited you rather than making you upset to lose your status as an original. Family links can be such a comfort. Well-written. Kate xx
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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This is a haunting read. Almost eerie hearing the echos toll through the generations. You obviously felt the same as you read Bonnie Jean's obituary. I am pleased that the parallels excited you rather than making you upset to lose your status as an original. Family links can be such a comfort. Well-written. Kate xx
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Dear Kate, so very nice to hear from you! I appreciate you taking time to read and review my piece. It really is a bit haunting! Families are so very complex, but learning about them is fascinating.
Sending lots of good wishes your way today!
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cngratulations on your second placing. Well-done
