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talk is cheap

a highly cheap talk

5 total reviews 
Comment from Lorrel Cooper
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Highly evocative while highlighting a common issue of people claiming to be allies and falling short when it comes time to help. The flow and cadance makes me imagine it would be wonderful read out loud.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

Comment from tfawcus
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This is quite a tongue-twister! The repetitions ram home the message most effectively. It also has the effect of raising the pace and sense of urgency.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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I'm intrigued. I'll have to start with the artwork because if I'm going to understand the drama and intensity behind this repetition, it will have to be with what looks like a prisoner that has been incarcerated for many years. Apparently, he has been trying to make his way out of jail but to no avail. They keep telling him talk is cheap. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

Comment from prettybluebirds
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This style of writing is interesting but it makes me kind of dizzy trying to read all the same words in different patterns. It must take a great deal of practice and perseverance to write in this manner. Nice work.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022