birds sitting on wires
a haiku8 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece leads me to wonder about the birds and what they say to each other as they look down on the humans below. It also reminds me of my daughter who, when younger, saw a bird with one leg and asked, "can that bird still fly with one leg?"
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This piece leads me to wonder about the birds and what they say to each other as they look down on the humans below. It also reminds me of my daughter who, when younger, saw a bird with one leg and asked, "can that bird still fly with one leg?"
Comment Written 20-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I see them perching like that--so close together--when I'm out walking. They do seem to be communicating! Your haiku is creative and clever--with a great metaphor.
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I see them perching like that--so close together--when I'm out walking. They do seem to be communicating! Your haiku is creative and clever--with a great metaphor.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a cute poem for the Haiku contest, and the picture is perfect. I especially like your final line. I've always wondered how the birds could space themselves so evenly along the wires. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
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What a cute poem for the Haiku contest, and the picture is perfect. I especially like your final line. I've always wondered how the birds could space themselves so evenly along the wires. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Lol. The "tight rope gossip club" got to me. I'm guessing they're gossiping about how hot the summer is, and how people are just everywhere, unmasked.
All the very best in the contest.
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Lol. The "tight rope gossip club" got to me. I'm guessing they're gossiping about how hot the summer is, and how people are just everywhere, unmasked.
All the very best in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from lyenochka
I like the "tightrope gossip club" for the satori ending. I always found it fun to watch birds socialize like that on the power lines. Enjoyed your haiku and best wishes in the contest!
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I like the "tightrope gossip club" for the satori ending. I always found it fun to watch birds socialize like that on the power lines. Enjoyed your haiku and best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from RodG
I love the light-hearted tone of your Haiku which really comes through in your third line. Birds chattering on a telephone wire does indeed sound like a "conversation" of gossips. Rod
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I love the light-hearted tone of your Haiku which really comes through in your third line. Birds chattering on a telephone wire does indeed sound like a "conversation" of gossips. Rod
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great art choice, Deb, for your haiku. I enjoyed reading
your entry. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words
flow smoothly with great imagery and alliteration.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
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What a great art choice, Deb, for your haiku. I enjoyed reading
your entry. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words
flow smoothly with great imagery and alliteration.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love your tight-rope gossip club Haiku, Deb and particularly the chair-bird sitting on the post overseeing the gossipers. Great, fun write and love the photo. Good luck in the contest, cheers.
valda
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I love your tight-rope gossip club Haiku, Deb and particularly the chair-bird sitting on the post overseeing the gossipers. Great, fun write and love the photo. Good luck in the contest, cheers.
valda
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! My apologies for the tardiness of this rep[ly - I've been off FS for a bit over a month. But I'm back and do appreciate your time in reading and commenting on the story.
Deb
