Haiku(cascading thunder)
Haiku33 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Congratulations on your one thousandth post. Very nice Haiku. The really big falls do sound a little like thunder. I'll bet there are a few trout in that stream.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on your one thousandth post. Very nice Haiku. The really big falls do sound a little like thunder. I'll bet there are a few trout in that stream.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Paul. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
I loved this, Melissa, your words described he sound so very well. I could hear it.
Congratulations on your 1000 post milestone. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I loved this, Melissa, your words described he sound so very well. I could hear it.
Congratulations on your 1000 post milestone. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Ulla. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
A hiaku that captures sight as well as sound! I love waterfalls. When you think of thunder, Niagara Falls comes to mind. Lovely picture. And congrats on your milestone!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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A hiaku that captures sight as well as sound! I love waterfalls. When you think of thunder, Niagara Falls comes to mind. Lovely picture. And congrats on your milestone!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much June. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are filled with sound, water, beauty are descriptive and
creative. I enjoyed the read of these words especially the last line.
How creative to state "the song of water" the poem became visual for me.
The artwork is beautiful and compliments the words of this poem well.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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The author's words are filled with sound, water, beauty are descriptive and
creative. I enjoyed the read of these words especially the last line.
How creative to state "the song of water" the poem became visual for me.
The artwork is beautiful and compliments the words of this poem well.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review Maria. Sorry for the late reply. :)
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
I love your well crafted haiku and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Hello,
I love your well crafted haiku and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done.
Gypsy Blue Rose
The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid. Atticus
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy!!
Melissa
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Congratulations on milestone post 1000. That is quite a feat. I love the picture that goes along with this haiku. The poem flows nicely, mirroring the image of the cascading thunder and the song of water. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Congratulations on milestone post 1000. That is quite a feat. I love the picture that goes along with this haiku. The poem flows nicely, mirroring the image of the cascading thunder and the song of water. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Tim. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Carol Clark2
Beautiful picture, and lovely words to accompany it. Congratulations on post number 1,000!!! Wow, that's quite a milestone! Great Haiku, with perfect syllable counts. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Beautiful picture, and lovely words to accompany it. Congratulations on post number 1,000!!! Wow, that's quite a milestone! Great Haiku, with perfect syllable counts. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Carol. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I just about passed on commenting since Haikus give so little to comment on, and then the milestone number appeared. That's a bunch. Have you shared all that you write or specific ones? I am over 2500 written in the five years since moving here and on my way to 200 on FS. I have a challenge finding contest for my style of writing. You do great. Congrats.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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I just about passed on commenting since Haikus give so little to comment on, and then the milestone number appeared. That's a bunch. Have you shared all that you write or specific ones? I am over 2500 written in the five years since moving here and on my way to 200 on FS. I have a challenge finding contest for my style of writing. You do great. Congrats.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Tom. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your haiku! "The song of water" is the perfect satori for this theme of the "cascading thunder" which is what a waterfall sounds like. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Great job with your haiku! "The song of water" is the perfect satori for this theme of the "cascading thunder" which is what a waterfall sounds like. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thanks so much Helen!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, we all seemed to perceive water in the same way, the irrepressible source of life, that sings its life giving song all over the earth, it's amazingly restful with its melody. Beautifully written Melissa, and good one 1,000 posts, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Oh yes indeed, we all seemed to perceive water in the same way, the irrepressible source of life, that sings its life giving song all over the earth, it's amazingly restful with its melody. Beautifully written Melissa, and good one 1,000 posts, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022
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Thank you so very much Roy. I love waterfalls and can always be inspired by their movement and sounds. So glad you liked this one!! I didn't know it was going to be my 1000 post, or I might have tried for something a bit longer. LOL. Thanks again.
Melissa
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Well done
